schedule
January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Monroe. :( Seriously... that girl's stuck in such a shitty situation -- meh, we've all probably been in a similar one before, right? Casey's certainly taking his new gayness/biness/whateverness with a grain of salt. But I suppose in the grand scheme of things, it's kinda the least of his problems, lol!
Keep on with the updates! I just had a baby 2 weeks ago & reading new chapters of my favorite stories keeps me occupied when I'm up in the middle of the night, bound to the couch, feeding the baby. :)
Keep on with the updates! I just had a baby 2 weeks ago & reading new chapters of my favorite stories keeps me occupied when I'm up in the middle of the night, bound to the couch, feeding the baby. :)
schedule
January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've really liked this so far. The dynamic between Sam and Cas is fascinating. It's so realistic, and so animalistic at times. I really liked it. Good job! I'm very much looking forward to the next installment.
schedule
January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just finished chapter 7 and I'm really enjoying this story. I like very much the growing tension between the characters. Thanks for writing !
schedule
January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think that casey just put a strain on his friendship with monroe. no matter what anyone says, they'll probably still have an awkward time in person...
ASOTA
ASOTA
schedule
January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good the characters are interesting and the story... wow... I really can't wait to see where you are headed and what will happen to your characters along the way.
schedule
January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't care still don't like him. Anyway poor poor girl I feel sorry for her, having all of that dumped on her right after waking up. At least Cas feels better now I do think he needed to talk to someone. ^_^
schedule
January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah time for a long rambling review! Yay!
Okay, so I got myself a bit mixed up, because I (and sometimes you! :P) took a while between chapters before getting to them, so I began to forget what had happened...so I can't quite remember when Casey took the jump from nice guy to...whatever messed up soul he his now. So his behavior to Monroe seemed a bit excessive to me, but that might have just been cause there was such a distance between readings. I also thought her appearance was sort of random, but it works. Also, she was a good outlet for the reader to see the changes that Casey had undergone. Such a (sometimes creepy) dick he was!
Okay so the last two chapters were AWESOME! I liked how realistic you made the locker room scene. Most authors fail to mention how messy things can be down there, so a touch of reality is nice and in a way, makes it sexier. Sometimes scenes like that just seem too fake and girlish. The fangirl in me enjoys some hot dirty man sex sometimes! :P
And Casey spilling the beans! When I was reading that part I shouted "Ahh! Noo! I can't believe he said that!" you know, embarrassing stuff like that. My boyfriend was like "what? who?" Me: "Casey just admitted to Sam that he loved him! OMFGKLDISFSDR2738623811!!11!" Him: "Ooookay..." and he went back to reading whatever he was reading. Haha! But yeah...sometimes I get too into things XD But that's good, right?
And the part with Sarah and Casey's dad...I have to admit, I've not a clue what's going on. It kind of dims in importance to me when it comes to the boys, sorry. I think I need to go reread some of it so I know what's going on with those two, I have a feeling it's important...
Anywho, though Sam has hurt Casey for now, I have a feeling they will both fuck up that stupid old mean man what's-his-name, and live happily ever after...or something like that. I don't know! Please post that next chapter and stop playing these mind games with me! But not really, I like them! ;)
Okay, so I got myself a bit mixed up, because I (and sometimes you! :P) took a while between chapters before getting to them, so I began to forget what had happened...so I can't quite remember when Casey took the jump from nice guy to...whatever messed up soul he his now. So his behavior to Monroe seemed a bit excessive to me, but that might have just been cause there was such a distance between readings. I also thought her appearance was sort of random, but it works. Also, she was a good outlet for the reader to see the changes that Casey had undergone. Such a (sometimes creepy) dick he was!
Okay so the last two chapters were AWESOME! I liked how realistic you made the locker room scene. Most authors fail to mention how messy things can be down there, so a touch of reality is nice and in a way, makes it sexier. Sometimes scenes like that just seem too fake and girlish. The fangirl in me enjoys some hot dirty man sex sometimes! :P
And Casey spilling the beans! When I was reading that part I shouted "Ahh! Noo! I can't believe he said that!" you know, embarrassing stuff like that. My boyfriend was like "what? who?" Me: "Casey just admitted to Sam that he loved him! OMFGKLDISFSDR2738623811!!11!" Him: "Ooookay..." and he went back to reading whatever he was reading. Haha! But yeah...sometimes I get too into things XD But that's good, right?
And the part with Sarah and Casey's dad...I have to admit, I've not a clue what's going on. It kind of dims in importance to me when it comes to the boys, sorry. I think I need to go reread some of it so I know what's going on with those two, I have a feeling it's important...
Anywho, though Sam has hurt Casey for now, I have a feeling they will both fuck up that stupid old mean man what's-his-name, and live happily ever after...or something like that. I don't know! Please post that next chapter and stop playing these mind games with me! But not really, I like them! ;)
schedule
December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Having read all the current 15 chapters, I got to say that I love the story. It was confusing at times, but I've become fond of the characters, and hope this story will last for several lovely chapters. Your writing is very different from others I've read on this site, and that should be taken as a compliment! You actually write a story with complications, something I find very interesting. Even thought I found the plot a bit much at the beginning, it developed very well.
You have gained a new fan, who will now start your other story :D
Hege~
You have gained a new fan, who will now start your other story :D
Hege~
schedule
December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oiy. You have me very confused now!!
Good confused though. I wouldn't necessarily mind being more confused either. ;)
Good confused though. I wouldn't necessarily mind being more confused either. ;)
schedule
December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor poor Casey I just want to hug him and protect him from evil evil Sam. Oh well Sam has his issues too. I do want to do evil things to boss man though. Maybe involving paperclips and rubber bands. ^_^