rate_review Reviews

This story is simply brilliant! Smart plot and such intense writing! And it only gets better.

Really looking forward to more

well, i don't think that i like comfort sex all that much...it's too sad. and poor simon.
ASOTA

WOW really great! One of your best chapters!

I don´t know why but I see something like a future for them...

oh Simon. At first it seemed so out of place but it was hard to see him attached to something/someone in this story. He passed the Sam torch to Casey and that was that. He really was an "aged soul" I think the drama for Casey and Sam are very well portrayed and though Sam keeps evolving, Casey seems very much true to his usual self. I would love to read the next installment.

As to your health, though I don't know your condition, I have gone through unexpected health crises and they suck. They put your life plans and flow out of order but in this hard time you must just take care of yourself and put everything else on hold. All the rest can be fixed later. I don't believe in deities, but I wish you a successful recovery and I hope you have family and friends to take good care of you! Cheers!

It was a pleasure beta-ing this, and I'm glad to see it in its published and descriptive gloryyyy; I love Casey.

Holy crap. I love this. I love how brutal Sam is and how Casey has evolved from someone almost...innocent...into someone more hard. Their dynamic is fantastic. Simon's a pleasure, too. Awesome, awesome job and I can't wait for more. It's so well-written and the dialogue always feels very natural... Not to mention the action is super intense. You've got me hooked.

I spent the weekend reading The Jigsaw. It is very good. I think it could be published right now. The quality of the writing and the plot are excellent. I am glad that Casey and Sam finally inched a little closer to each other. I hope Sam will get some loving soon too. Even one night together before they start fighting again would be great. I am sorry for Sarah because I feel like she has a lot of suffering ahead of her. Her unknowingly killing Casey's father is almost like a death sentence. The only concern I have is the fact that Casey does not know about his father's death. I am sure his mom and sister are waiting for him to come home. I also wonder if Simon and Sarah are kind of in love? I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for the next chapter.

P.S. I definitely want a happy ending. I feel that this story is about Sam coming back from the brink of inhumanity. He definitely deserves some kind of "happy?" ever after with Casey. And lots of loving from Casey too.

these two characters make me laugh... I need to reread this when I'm not exhausted from pilates class...

I like Marrakesh, I like Essaouira and Fez better but Marrakesh is nice. I'm probably heading there come september to visit friends.

I'm going to go collapse now... ja'ne

WOW that was really hot!
i love this story so plsss keep writing and update sooon!!! XD