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Oh my dear god.

That was the most wonderful chapter! Seriously! The imagery, the sensations & feelings... it turned what would simply be a chapter of smut into something so completely hot & passionate that I'm getting myself all sweaty & flustered from it. ;)

I've been waiting forever for this chapter & it totally did not disappoint.

Oh, and I want to pick up Sam by the neck & shake him back and forth, lol. God, the man shows such potential, then he has to go and be a douchebag all over again. He makes me want to scream!

Sweet jesus, I demand more from you right this instant!! :)

Hi. I hope you are doing better. I admire you for doing any amount of writing when you are not feeling well. I get the sneaking suspicion that Sam is your favorite character. The reason- he is so messed up. I can't believe that Sam could not hang in there until Casey could find some satisfaction too. Casey paced himself into Sam's hands and Sam just left him there. Tears and all. Oh Sam. Why? What will become of these two? I feel that Sam is in a desperate state and that Casey really needs to connect with him. If this relationship fails, Sam will be totally destroyed. I think that he is so scared of the possibility of a relationship with Casey, that he would rather panic and chicken out than give the relationship a fighting chance. It will be really hard for Casey if Sam is going to sabotage their relationship at every turn. I guess if Casey hangs around after this, it will show Sam that he is really serious. I think they both need to get a good spanking.

I just started reading this today. I'm only on ch. 8, but I can't stop reading! It's such a fascinating story! So much intrigue, mystery and humor! It's like reading Robert Ludlum, and James Bond (Ian Fleming, was it?) all in one! It's awesome!

I feel so bad for Casey; his whole life now belongs to these people. How horrible is that? Especially now that he knows the agents knew about it from the start and never told him.

Anyway, gotta keep reading; no kids this weekend; hopefully I can finish all 23? chapters!!!!!

Oh, one more thing: Casey was right: SAM SMOKES WAYYYYY TOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!! I personallY HATE smoke; so thinking of Casey having to spend days in one room w/this guy constantly smoking, makes me kinda nauseaus! (Did I spell that right? Too lazy to look it up!)


Ok, had to get that off my chest! Back to this fabulous story!!

Sam is still an asshole!
But well he's Sam so he didn't explain what happened.
Poor Cas.
Hopefully we'll get the next update soon

8) Your prologue definitely got me going. I really want to know what's going on! Great way of catching attention and your prologue really points out one thing: which reality are we living in?

No, not Simon!! :'(

Seriously, I'm shocked that he's gone. I can typically see these types of things coming from a mile away but bam! there it is. You've gone and shocked the shit out of me.

And made me a very sad girl.

I don't know why considering that we knew very little about Simon, but I really loved his character & anticipated him playing a somewhat major role in the rest of the story whether it be a protagonist or antagonist or even just screwer-up-of-shit.

But I am sooooooooo thrilled that you updated. This is hands down one of the best, most well thought out, mature stories on this site.

Evil cliffhanger! I almost cried when I realized that the chapter was over. I think Sam and Casey are finally ready for each other. I hope they can make this experience good by not fighting for the next ten minutes! They are so volatile. Casey wants to be on top but but I think they should definitely take turns. I think that Casey has so much to learn from Sam. I can't believe that Simon is dead.

Simon's death is yet one more disaster that Sarah is responsible for. She is like a nightmare employee.

Hurray! You updated. i will read and review.