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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Canterro: I'm glad you like my reviews! I am just so taken by this story! I was so excited to see you updated and couldn't wait to read it! I even told my 15 yr. old about this story (minus the smut!) And he thinks I only read smut!!!!! I told him no way, I'm reading this awesome story about the FBI, James Bond action; it's one of the best stories on here!
I'm glad that Sam was acting semi-human in the last chapter. I think Casey deserves a huge sorry from Sam, altho he won't get it, I know.
You describe their relationship and their characters so well. They're both so broken, especially Sam; he's been through so much in his short life and it seems that he doesn't know how to handle any type of relationship, any type of give and take w/dealing w/another human being. He's just so used to being in his own fucked up world, with no one to count on but himself. He only had Simon and Simon was even getting sick and tired of Sam's attitude towards everything. Maybe Casey can get Sam to open up more and maybe if Casey gives more of himself, Sam will feel more comfortable w/trusting someone else. Or of course it could backfire for both of them: they could be afraid of giving themselves to someone else for fear of losing them. They've both lost people due to their jobs, by trusting someone else, they leave their emotions open and vulnerable to get hurt again, especially if either one of them get really hurt during the job.
Anyway, that's my untrained psychoanalysis, don't mind me! Great chapter, as usual! Again, I'm glad Sam showed some little bit of a human side in this chapter! Can't wait for the next one; I'm keeping my fingers crossed that he doesn't hurt Casey again.
I'm glad that Sam was acting semi-human in the last chapter. I think Casey deserves a huge sorry from Sam, altho he won't get it, I know.
You describe their relationship and their characters so well. They're both so broken, especially Sam; he's been through so much in his short life and it seems that he doesn't know how to handle any type of relationship, any type of give and take w/dealing w/another human being. He's just so used to being in his own fucked up world, with no one to count on but himself. He only had Simon and Simon was even getting sick and tired of Sam's attitude towards everything. Maybe Casey can get Sam to open up more and maybe if Casey gives more of himself, Sam will feel more comfortable w/trusting someone else. Or of course it could backfire for both of them: they could be afraid of giving themselves to someone else for fear of losing them. They've both lost people due to their jobs, by trusting someone else, they leave their emotions open and vulnerable to get hurt again, especially if either one of them get really hurt during the job.
Anyway, that's my untrained psychoanalysis, don't mind me! Great chapter, as usual! Again, I'm glad Sam showed some little bit of a human side in this chapter! Can't wait for the next one; I'm keeping my fingers crossed that he doesn't hurt Casey again.
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Squealing with joy! Let Casey's revenge begin! I am rubbing my hands together in anticipation. Sam can be so cute. I wanted to climb in and give him a hug when he started to confess that he was scared. He sure got the unfair end of things when he was a child. I always felt strongly that siblings should not be separated in adoption. It is so unfair. I think that finding Sam's burial stone may have helped Casey to forgive that unforgivable Sam. I think Casey will do a much better job of making love to Sam than Sam did when making love to Casey. I think you were very true to their characters because Sam might not be capable of giving anything to anyone right now. Awesome chapter. Thanks for the fast update and I hope you are also feeling better.
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Our boy is becoming a man lol
Thanks for the quickupdate
Thanks for the quickupdate
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don´t know why but I had a feeling you would update.....:)
This chapter feels rushed, fast... I want more!(but longer)
(I still have the feeling that Sam should do more, I mean Casey is fighting and Sam always fucks up...)
This chapter feels rushed, fast... I want more!(but longer)
(I still have the feeling that Sam should do more, I mean Casey is fighting and Sam always fucks up...)
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15. I love how this chapter went. A taste of the frosting on the cake and no dinner or desserts as punishment. -smacks lips- Very delicious and it happens to be erotic while at it.
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God I missed an update :( but I could read two new chapters :)
To the review:
How could you stop writing!!!!!!!!!!! (Okay it´s not a `real` cliffhanger but it is an emotional one...)
Their first time together (beside the beach) and then that...I think I hoped for more...and now Sam tries to go back to his old self...
To the review:
How could you stop writing!!!!!!!!!!! (Okay it´s not a `real` cliffhanger but it is an emotional one...)
Their first time together (beside the beach) and then that...I think I hoped for more...and now Sam tries to go back to his old self...
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck! I just caught up! Ok, so it took me three days of reading only this!
Ok, I knew Sam was a number one asshole, but this just confirms it more. I didn't think he could get any worse, but I was wrong. Poor Casey, trusting him yet again. Can't Sam just TRY to be human, just for once?
Oh, I noticed you spelled prostate wrong in the chapter. No biggie. I also was laughing; do guys really have to take enemas before? I don't think I ever read a story on here where a guy has an enema. Interesting....(and kinda gross!) I guess I never really thought about it before; everyone else always writes nice "clean" descriptions! Hahahah
Anyway, now that I'm caught up, I can't wait for your next update!!!!
And again, I hope you're feeling better.
Now I should start on your other story!
Ok, I knew Sam was a number one asshole, but this just confirms it more. I didn't think he could get any worse, but I was wrong. Poor Casey, trusting him yet again. Can't Sam just TRY to be human, just for once?
Oh, I noticed you spelled prostate wrong in the chapter. No biggie. I also was laughing; do guys really have to take enemas before? I don't think I ever read a story on here where a guy has an enema. Interesting....(and kinda gross!) I guess I never really thought about it before; everyone else always writes nice "clean" descriptions! Hahahah
Anyway, now that I'm caught up, I can't wait for your next update!!!!
And again, I hope you're feeling better.
Now I should start on your other story!
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuck! I just finished ch. 17 and OMG!!!Sarah killed Casey's dad????? OMG, and what an idiot he was; getting in the way; he should have just stayed out of it.
And wtf is w/Sam shooting Casey; really wtf is wrong w/Sam???? I've been wanting to smack him upside his head for the past few chapters now; what the fuck is his problem?????
I know all your readers have read this ch. a long time ago, but I just had to comment. This story is so action packed; it's amazing!
And wtf is w/Sam shooting Casey; really wtf is wrong w/Sam???? I've been wanting to smack him upside his head for the past few chapters now; what the fuck is his problem?????
I know all your readers have read this ch. a long time ago, but I just had to comment. This story is so action packed; it's amazing!
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Shit, I just finished ch. 21 where you fucking killed Simon!!!!! OMG, how could you do that?! I liked Simon! He was a good guy! Compared to some.
I feel so bad for Sam; he's feeling so alone, abandoned; luckily he has Casey, who is feeling the same b/c of his dad...if they can only continue acting semi-nice to one another!
I'm just speechless; I was so upset that Simon was killed. How can Sarah trust LaVay (is that his name?). How does she know he won't just kill her? And Ramson; he's been the original "bad" guy this whole time! Jesus!
What a fucking GREAT story you tell!!!!!
On a personal note: I hope you are doing better since your surgery. I noticed in your A/N at the beginning of the chapter. I don't know how long ago this chapter was written, but I hope you are all recovered. If it's any consolation; you write magnificantly (sorry if that's spelled wrong; I'm too lazy to look it up!) when you're not feeling well.
I feel so bad for Sam; he's feeling so alone, abandoned; luckily he has Casey, who is feeling the same b/c of his dad...if they can only continue acting semi-nice to one another!
I'm just speechless; I was so upset that Simon was killed. How can Sarah trust LaVay (is that his name?). How does she know he won't just kill her? And Ramson; he's been the original "bad" guy this whole time! Jesus!
What a fucking GREAT story you tell!!!!!
On a personal note: I hope you are doing better since your surgery. I noticed in your A/N at the beginning of the chapter. I don't know how long ago this chapter was written, but I hope you are all recovered. If it's any consolation; you write magnificantly (sorry if that's spelled wrong; I'm too lazy to look it up!) when you're not feeling well.
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!! I just finished ch. 10 when the team had to go into a hostage situation. OMG, I'm like at the edge of my fucking seat!!!!!! This is better than watching any CSI shows!!!!! OMG, you are amazing; you have such a vivid imagination, I can picture everything in my head: Sam strapped to the chair, only one eye working, ribs broken, Sarah tied to a metal pole, poor Casey flying above in the air..... You are incredible!
Ok, gotta read ch. 11 and make sure Sam's gonna be ok. Altho I know Sarah really fucked up; she was basically shooting on instinct to save that girl. What should she have done? But yeah, she seriously put her and Sam's life in grave danger.
Ok, gotta read ch. 11 and make sure Sam's gonna be ok. Altho I know Sarah really fucked up; she was basically shooting on instinct to save that girl. What should she have done? But yeah, she seriously put her and Sam's life in grave danger.