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I wanted to comment further on the last chapter. I was thinking about it again last night. Thinking about it again, I realized that Casey practically raped Sam. I mean, no prep, no lube and he didn't seem to care about Sam's enjoyment. At least when Sam did it, he prepared Casey and made sure he was having fun. If I were Sam, I'd be really pissed. It was worse than what Sam did to Casey. And how is that love? Casey confessed his love to Sam again, but how is that love? He really owes Sam an apology.

Anyway, I wanted to throw my two cents in again!lol Have a great weekend!

Wow, chapter 25 pops up before I even have a chance to read & review chapter 24!! Guess I don't need to be a pushy bitch demanding that you update after all, eh? I can still nag though if you feel you need the motivation, lol. I'm good at nagging. :)

I'm not sure what to think about chapter 25... well, first, excellently written as always!! You're absolutely one of the top authors on this site. I could hate the story line & would still read it if you wrote it because you've got such skill at description and making the reader feel like they're an active observer in the story.

But back to the content of the chapter -- seriously not cool what Casey did. Pay back or not. Yeah, the guy DEFINITELY earned the right to exact some revenge for what Sam did to him. But to rape him? A person who gets their feelings hurt to the degree that Casey did when Sam shunned him after their first frolic in bed isn't capable of raping someone as a form of retribution. It doesn't mesh with her personality. Sure, he's upset, sure it's possible to get caught up in the moment (been there, done that)... but that's pretty drastic for someone who is as thinking & feeling as Casey.

And WTF Sam? You just sit there & take it?

But on the other hand, I guess I sort of understand it. Sam is physical, Casey is emotional. So Same getting "raped" is the equivalent of Casey getting shunned because that's the modus operandi for the characters. And they're not normal people living in a normal world. Clearly. So expecting them to take a conventional approach to their relationship such as talking through differences rationally is probably asking a bit much.

Though a girl can dream.

They're both damaged and hurting so badly in their own different ways... I just so badly want them to be able to show some LOVE to each other instead of antagonism, sarcasm & sexually-charged hostility because it's what they need so badly.

Yeah, Casey gave the "shitty feeling" right back at him! Altho he found no joy in it. I think he shouldn't have done that, altho, did he get to Sam b/c of what he did, or in spite of it?

I actually don't think Sam would have relinquished control to anyone other than Casey. And Casey liked being in control for once.

But, one question: how come Casey didn't make Sam have an enema??? Hahahahaha I couldn't stop thinking of that! Wait, Casey, Sam needs a fucking enema first!!!! lol

Revenge is good lol
But sorry I still don't feel bad for Sam. Not that I'm saying he should be raped.
I'm still feeling sorry for Casey (seems like I'm die hard Casey fan :) )
He love Sam and trying to get the man in anyway he can. Sam doesn't do lovey dovey, so Casey goes Sam's way. I don't think Casey really enjoyed it judging from his character.
Sex scene is good! I like rough sex XD
Looking forward to the new update. *cuddles Casey*

I'm doing catch up since I haven't been around to read your story. And I just finished chapter 19.

You've really gotten me here. The depth of your story, the characters, the plot, the whole development of it all makes it one hell of a good story on AFF. There's no rush in how the story rises and falls that each chapter characterizes the people in your story and the plot. I love the suspense that you've kept with Sam and Casey's relationship with their uncanny way of avoiding their love(and maybe lust?) for each other.

As for happy endings, really, happy endings are all good, but sometimes way to predictable. I'll be hoping for a surprise for the ending of Sam and Casey. I do enjoy the rides you give with each of your chapter. Keep up the great work!

ROFL! Chapter 20. Really, you've pulled Sam and Casey's blow job scene to the max! The transition was beautiful and the way that ended was full of satisfaction. It was just enough and yet not over bearing.

Simon and Sarah now, those two exchanging a quick fuck for information, now that was tempting. Beautifully delicious.

Chapter 21. I love how you do the unexpected and surprise me every time. You've worked beyond the common occurrences in most stories on AFF and given me the appetizers to your creative mind. I'm insanely jealous of your patience and creativity(in a good way :3) in developing your stories that makes them grow on readers. Great work and keep it up!

Chapter 22. I love how you took your time in this entire chapter to build the climax for Sam and Casey. Their teasing, playful and sometimes irritated response to each other is a gem and you polished it to perfection.

Wooo~ Love how chapter 23 ended. The passion and pleasure was all so bitter sweet in the end. If I was Casey, even though I'd hate myself for giving in, I'd probably not regret it. ;)

-grins- I'm glad that nothing has dampened your creativity or your style in writing. I love the humor you've added here and there through out the progress of your story and I can't wait to read more. Ahem.....

[Announcer]
With the lost of Simon and Sarah on the run under LaVay's catalytic influence, what underhanded plans will Ramson unless this time? As Sam and Casey rebuild their relationship through hits and miss, will their currently brittle relationship withstand the test of time as trials of tribulation are wrought into their chaotic life?