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for The Jigsaw

by canterro

person Anon
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now THIS is the kind of story I've been looking for. I absolutely love your plot and your style of writing. The sarcastic wit and humour, the banter between Sam and Casey plus the tension thrown in there is exhilarating, and not in the slashy way. Though I'm looking forward to it. I like how you keep the reader waiting for the rawr. I just like how real you write about the agents lives and the limitless possibilities and awkward situations you can get Sam and Casey into. You can guess who my fave characters are. Sorry didn't review earlier, too wrapped up in this fiction. Can't wait for the next chapter! Okay i commented, so, you know the drill. Don't keep me hanging. Ha ha
person canterro
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you :)
I've corrected my 'coach' ;)
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!! really long chappie!!! i loved it!! soooooooo many things happened in this chapter... i don't know where to start, but you are definitely a great writer!!! i don't know how people like you can come up with plots this intriguing!!! your imagination is exellent!!! i can't do that... never been good at that sort of thing so it's hard for me to imagine, and it's always so shocking!! great job!!! please update soon, if you can!!!
ASOTA
person nay
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I want more! I wasn't sure what to think at first, but I'm loving it. Your characters are believable and the story flows naturally- and I like how you're not just forcing these guys together in unbelievaable circumstance, but you are establishing a real base and storyline. Oh how I love storylines! Keep up the good work!

Oh, and I noticed you keep spelling couch 'coach'. thought you outta know
person Aleks
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so I´m waiting for the next time... ;)

their first mission.... poor Casey but he´ll survive....

Waiting for what they´ll find out..... (hidden meaning:update) :)
person Zsadarya
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, because I know how desperate an author is for getting reviews, I'll write something. ;)
The story is very well written and has an really interesting plot. From all your characters, Sam is the most intriguing one. I like it when the personality isn't so bright and overly correct. I like the mystery that surrounds him, and his toughness and his sexy arrogance, and even though he is not the main-main character, he is undoubtedly the one I like most. The constant teasing between him and Casey is very entertaining and gives hope for even more exciting issues to come. Hopefully soon! Just a little bit more of excitement than the dancefloor scene already has been. :)

So, please, keep on writing because it would be a shame when this story disappears like it happened with other good ones.
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Seriously, it's my new favorite fic on AFFN. I can't figure out why you don't have more reviews... I am on the edge of my seat awaiting updates. :) You've got a spectacular talent for creating first-person VISION... Like, I really feel like I've seen what Casey has seen. It's spectacular.

Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad to see that sam and casey are at least getting along now, and finally!!! the mission has begun!!! you hack that computer, casey!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! great work!!!
ASOTA
person Aleks
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really nice long chapter....now the real action starts...
I hope (for his sake) he doesn´t get drunk....not with this people, on the other hand that´s great potential for the next chapter :)
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an interesting story, if not dramatic at times. i like it though and wish for it to be continued in the near future. savvy??? not a demand by the way, just charging your batteries as you say...
ASOTA

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