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for A Love Collided

by Nymphidalia

schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok. enjoyed the plot. very original and strong. ? is Chanda totally going to break her priestess in training chastity vows to do it with a sexy older woman? if she is...can i watch? in my head that is. you should keep going, i'm in suspense. and i'm with Chanda her new sister in law sounds bitchy and prude! the begining scene with the sibling love she has for her bro reminds me of the greatest incest anime and movie! Chanda should totally blow off her bro love and do it with the sexy looking Shelia. well that's my opinions and thoughts. its great. will keep reading the rest of your originals, and get to the anime and naruto ones to the end when i can focus on them and i don't just glance through, and have it just go over my head and be lost as i am with new fandoms. YAY.
person babyboo3
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
plezzz update!!!!!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Well, what do you know? I was looking at some of my first reviews for "Noble Blood" and I click your name and POOF! A great story! I must say that I LOVE the names you chose, "Chanda" that's adorable. AND I love the premise of your story, such good workings! Nice work, keep it up.