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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God!! That was really fucking hot! Please write more. It's really good and I think you should continue.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hestia? like the greek goddess of hearth & home & cooking? well, you certainly cooked up a really good meal! :D you described the characters so well & from a first-person narrative. i think that's rare to find. most of the 1st person stories, at least that i can think of, are sexsexsex.... not that there is necessarily anything wrong with that. you made a unique balance of plot & describing words and sex. exceptional! i look forward to reading more well thought-out stories by you. :)
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love all the things that the older brother wants to do to and with the younger.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome!
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this story is good. Nice writing style and it makes me want to read more. ;] Sorry, don't have much to say though.
Bye bye.
-Hello
Bye bye.
-Hello
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! U AWESOME!!!
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 is absolutely yummy.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! i luv u!!!
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I sure liked the fist chappi! ^^
And that guy sounds really funny! I can't wait to know more about him!
...I so wonder what's gonna happen between the two brothers next!! ><
Plz update again soon! ^^
And that guy sounds really funny! I can't wait to know more about him!
...I so wonder what's gonna happen between the two brothers next!! ><
Plz update again soon! ^^
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you decided to post your story here as well. Looking forward to rereading it.