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by limegreenandtangerine

person Birddi
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have not read your story yat. I wanted to say your summary makes no sense, and I'd advise you to change it. Cheers.
person BennyPeace
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, it definitely doesn't suck so far but I'm not sure what the plot is yet? I reallyyy want an update for Incoherence though.
person BennyPeace
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And to the first reviewer's comment...I'm pretty sure you guys were going for ambiguity on purpose?