rate_review Reviews

This is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the characters, I love the fast pace you set up in the phrasing and all.

Chapter 4

Wow! You really can make my stomach do the ole flip-flop!!!
Sad, and glad, and hot!!! Love the dialog and the story!!
I was completely surprised to find out they hadn't done IT too!!!

Thanks,
R

Chapter 3

These two have GOT to proclaim their mutual love and...
but then, where would the story be?!! Nevermind!!

Lovely writing!! Great characters and atmosphere and dialog!!!

Thanks,
R

Ah, the cruelty of ending the chapter right here! I'm loving this story!

I've been worshipping y'all as gods for 'bout a year and a half, now. xD *tosses a couple more candles in the smut shrine* I like this new story- threesome moment! Threesomes make me happy =3- but I'm kinda sensing a... lack of editing involved. In bits and pieces of your other stories, the fact that they're RP'd gets kinda obvious in a paragraph or something, but most of the seams are ironed out in them; this one seems kinda raw. S'distracting. Nonetheless, it's a good start!

Chapters 1-2

Really like all three characters!!
They really are characters!!!

Close friends can make it hard on the new person,
and the "threesome moment" was priceless the way Jude
flew off the bed!!

Looks to be a lot of fun!

Thanks,
R

Here is one vote for worshipping you as gods.

Ok, I admit that I'm a little weird, but I honestly take the summaries to heart before I read any story on aff.net. The summary for this piece caught my attention, but left me confused. So, I read the chapter to find out who was who (or whom)... but I still don't know. I'm even more confused. The story has great writing and fantastic character description (not too much, not too little), but (in my humble opinion) if you don't identify the emotions from the summary as belonging to which character, I'm not going to continue reading. Who likes who? Who hates who? Who keeps thinking about the other two? ...I guess I'm looking for the emotions from the summary to show up in the characters, so that I can identify them. Good luck in continuing the story!

I like the story
I like the characters
and I want you to continue this.
but could please stop that going back a few moments in time, because the story is so obviously rped.
it's just confusing to have to adapt to that.
but apart from that it's really coool....

WoW! Nice story! I like it! ^^
I can't wait to know what Elliot's answer gonna be! ><
Plz update again soon! Can't wait to have more! *hugs*