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for Birthday

by limegreenandtangerine

person ariesgirl
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hate tad.
a lot.
and still waiting for Leander to and Elliot to get together.
maybe with the pink sparkly dildo? ^^
i really like this story, can't wait for more

happy new year to you too
person Koira
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great way to end this year =D
person BennyPeace
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You always have the greatest stories.
person ariesgirl
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEEE!!!
they're so SO CUTE
i love Elliot and Leander so much
how much more alcohol is it gona take for them to fuck already? they can't keep their hands of each other!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a huge huge fan of this story. I am so glad to see it's still up. (I have fic abandonment issues - hahaha). The characters are awesome and it seems like all possibilities are open. I'm so curious where you're taking them!

For this chapter - nice dancing scene! So visual!
person Rosei
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter "OhFive!"


Oh!! I love Leander so much and it hurts that that sadist
got to really have a go at him!! Dang!!!

That boy has GOT to stop drinking!!!! Elliot and him have GOT
to talk to one another!!!! It's killing me !!!!! HA!

Great how you write!!! I simultaneously love and hate Jude!!! Wow!!!


Thanks,
R
person Koira
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1. You can't tell anymore that it is rped.
2. And it is so amazingly well-written.
3. I love this story, just in case I haven't mentioned this before.
person eroburn
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent as always.

i am literally drooling right now.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd read this up to chapter two, and then it somehow disappeared from my radar (which is crazy because it is SO GOOD, and I'm an asshole for not commenting before!) but I am very, very glad that you guys posted another chapter so that I could re-read the two chapters and then a whole bunch of fantastic new ones. Your stories are absolutely some of the best on this whole site. Not only I am unbearably jealous, but I am also super stoked because this is definitely a story with which I am completely engaged! You create these amazing characters, and then, better yet, you create these uber amazing relationships between the characters that I could read probably forever. Hooray for being excellent!
person Koira
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just dropped by to mention that I really love this story. Bye.