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by limegreenandtangerine

schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I miss this story so hard.
person Infek
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a fucking beautiful story. Sorry for the swearing but... Leander's depiction just about broke my heart. And there are very few stories in which a leading character makes me feel so sad. He's so lovable but at the same time you're hoping he sees reason.

You two write amazingly and I am highly anticipating the next chapter(s).
person kylee
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good. it is heartbreaking too. Leander is drifting from guy to guy because he should be with Elliott. Kind of like cutting himself but finding someone else to do it. Perhaps Elliott should try a more aggressive approach to saving Leander or his friend might end up dead. I am very interested to see what happens next. Maybe Jude could help things by being more welcoming to Leander.
person BennyPeace
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this chapter made me tear up.
person Rosei
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10

I can't believe he let him just walk away!!!!!!
They were the bestest of friends!!! FRIENDS!!!!!!

So well written it kills me!!!!
These two need some serious intervention!!!
But who can help Leander but Leander!!!

And it's all so tragic that he thinks he has no problems,
that he just chooses to NOT use his safe word!!! WOW!!

Being a glutton for punishment can't be a long term character trait
when you've got a big guy like Tad not taking care of the mess afterwards.

I don't know. Amazing how you all got these two characters to do a 180
from the first couple of chapters!!! (There goes my dreams of a threesome with Jude!!! HA)

Thanks for the update!
R

(Still in there cheering for a threesome! THREESOME!! THREESOME!!! THREESOME!!!!)

schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was just thinking about this story today, so I decided to come back and read it. And I'm still crazy about it. These are some of my most favourite characters ever.
person Rosei
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You guys are killing me!!!!!
Angst it is!!!! YEOW!!!! OUCH!!!!!
I'm needing a happy moment here, somewhere,
sometime, coming up soon... I hope. HA!

If he dies I'm gonna, (shakin' fist in the air in
threatening manner, but looking really dumb)
hold my breath!!!!!

Thanks,
R



schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i adore this story. never stop. (please).
person ariesgirl
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
congrats on the nomination!
and aww, this is making me sad.
i feel like they all need a hug.
... maybe a nekkid one...
stupid leander making elliot sad like that, although i don't know which one i feel worse for right now T.T
person Rosei
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7-8

This is written soooo good!!!!!
You're breakin' my heart here!!!

Leander must get his kicks from someone
who will not actually kick him!!!! HA!!

Maybe Jude could find it in his heart to
get the two friends together - (THREESOME!!!!)

But Jude's so possessive of Elliot, maybe he
could just kick TAD's ass!!!!! YAH!!!!

Sorry!!! I'm emotionally involved!!!!! HA!

Thanks,
R