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for Dyad: Kreshjur and Kajin

by wanderingaddict

schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here I sit,
Broken hearted,
Came to read
But you got nothing started...

Haha! That rhymed and it didn't even MENTION farts! um...oops...

Lol sorry wonderboy, couldn't resist, I'm having one of my moments of silliness, I think someone spiked my de-caf with caffeine o.0. anyway, I am broken hearted, I got my hopes up when you updated my other favourite, Ceald Amothien, and thought I would check here before I fell asleep...hoping against hope *sigh*.

Heh, no biggy, I suppose if you had updated them both then your work wouldn't be as spectacular as it is. Anyhoo (I've got a new Canadian mate and his lingo is rubbing off on me...) I've put the email that actually works on my profile incase you were trying to write to me. I miss ya letters, they satisfy my craving for your work in between the moments of greatness when you post :P

Cya wonderwiki, and the latest chapter of Ceald? My gawd, I"ve been having dreams about the base of Valen's...

Tail :D
person Maco
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!

First things first - your story totally rocks!

This is actually kind of new for me, I rarely read anything other than fanfiction on the 'net. At first I wasn't really sure what to make of your story, all those names and places with strange names. Turns out - after ten minutes I was sucked in completely.

And please, please, please - continue? I can't await to read more of this tale.

Yours hopefully,
Maco
person Iris
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so brilliant... you must write more!
(Well, you know, no pressure or anything... but it really is a fantastic story.)
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderboy....

You are simply the most talented writer I have ever seen. I LOVE this! IM so bloody excited about it that it's not funny. As always, the detail is entrancing, Kreshjur andKajin are just hot...that bloody sexual tension that you establish so effortlessly is as deliciously frustrating as ever...but the story? Holy crap wonderwiki.... it's just magic! My favourite FAVOURITE thing is the Circle of Crones. Even the way that you have made their powers and position intertwine with an Archon is just ... genius. This is brilliant, and I love how Kajin has that 'aura' that can influence people but can be resisted with wards etc making him rely on his own intelligence to debate and argue. It gives him so much depth it's not funny, and is far more intriguing that him simply being perfection incarnate. I cannot wait for more. Seriously. The whole nomad threat is .... well...me very freaking excited. I cannot WAIT! Onward for battles and magic and romance and sexual tension and everything you are the master of! GET WRITING! Lol. I'm stoked that you are doing this, we are in for a treat!