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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. It's amazing. I haven't seen the movie in years, and this makes me want to go out and rent it or something, and just imagine it's with a guy instead of the chick...
Why haven't you updated your story yet? You said a week or two!
Why haven't you updated your story yet? You said a week or two!
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you, this story has fixed itself into my favorites list. You have a wonderfully witty and yet sort of dark style that is so very appealing, especially in the character of Fabian. I adore the small interactions between he and Jilly as well as his make-shift soccer ball subjects. The character Avery is absolutely wonderful. You've managed to bring in the sort of innocent, naive attitude that Sarah has and put it into an adorable, amusing, and believable boy. I believe that is what I love about your story the most. You've managed to bring so much depth and life to these characters that they seem even more tangible than the original characters of Labyrinth ever could be. I look forward to reading more of this and I am very, very tempted to draw fanart for you. o_o It takes a really amazing author to get me to want to draw original characters.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome! This story has me completely hooked! The most recent chapter was very well done and heartbreaking... Here's to hoping our hero gets out of this mess.
I wait with baited breath for your next update!
I wait with baited breath for your next update!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha that's what he gets for being cocky! ^-^ I love Labryath(spell?) the movie soooooo much, and I did feel kinda sad that Jarth was left, but that relationship would not work out i guess, I was always wondering how that movie would be like if it were slashed!^_^ ahhh nice boyXboyness....anyway great thank you you have make one reader here very happy xp. Please keep updating i can't wait to see what happens next yyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a long time fan of the original "Labyrinth"...so when I saw this...I just had to read it...I was very, pleasantly surprised...although, I would have liked for the chapters to be a bit longer...the short chapters actually give it more of a...story book feel...which, honestly, adds to the overall theme...*chuckles*
"Jilly giggled. Now she had a toy for each hand." I can actually picture my friends little niece doing this...very cute
Anyhow, I can't wait for the next update, hun...it's very intriguing so far...well written...and very amusing!
"Jilly giggled. Now she had a toy for each hand." I can actually picture my friends little niece doing this...very cute
Anyhow, I can't wait for the next update, hun...it's very intriguing so far...well written...and very amusing!
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shouldn't this be in the movie section?
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep updating please! I enjoy this story very much!
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the discription. You incorporated the old look with a newer one perfectly. You made a little error when Avery was asking for Jilly back and said " I want him back" however every one makes mistakes. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you changed the animal. Good choice by the way.