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for Black's Magic

by theMaven

schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was so well written & realistic, you had me hooked. You had me at "hello". My expectations from the summary were low & your text was riding a horse that leaped over them & won my tournament of expectations. The vocabulary & grammar was stellar work & the chemistry between the characters was among the most realistic I've seen on this site. All in all, amazingly well done & whether you choose to write more or not, this piece right here would have Ebert & Roeper at your feet.
*four thumbs up* Yes, I'm an alien. lol
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was nice! Awesome and Wonderful. And anything other positive word out there. I'm such a huge fan of yours and will read anything you produce. Until next time

Happy wirting!
person angell
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story fucking ROCKS!!! i hope you keep writing, you are very talented! i like that daniel and mecca were able to find what seems like love even after thier shitty past reltionships. it gives for hope for the people who have been in bad or failed relationships and are trying to find companionship and love again. GREAT story!!! if i had my way you would write more chapters for it, but either way, its wonderful!
rainh