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for Burning the stars

by Jetfire

person Jae
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeease update soon!!
person bambi4real
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Not sure whose going to come out on top...:)
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!! IT DOES!!!!
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this shouta?
person Ashleigh
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
<3 Love it~! =) It's good that you have someone to double check it for you. Doesn't seem like English is your second language from your writing, I can't even tell. I'm liking Blaze a lot, he reminds me of Shippo from Inuyasha cause he's a prankster, mixed with Inuyasha dog ears; except Blaze has a tail in my mind, he looks cuter than Inuyasha. I got kinda confused with Blazes' Papa and Father, but then I realized he had two fathers. lol I'm liking this a lot and it's only 2 chapters in. Orion I'm guessing is gonna be in for a real shock when he finds out who Blaze really is. I can't wait for more to posted. <3
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!! you updated! i was SOOOOO confused at first. i was wonderin if Blaze had 2 dads or not, but all clear now. well, hope to read more soon. love yas bye
person Sekre
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful first chapter!
person Sekre
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will continue to stay tuned for the next chapter.
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
u made me happy
person Saminada
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Muahahahaha!!!!! Great Chapter! n__n
It was soooooo funny! Running naked!! hihi ^^
Orion seams to have his mind set on what a Shifter is! I, of course, hope that he will eventually change his mind! >> (Blaze will help him with that tho right??)ehe

And I must say, I was a bit confused when I saw that Blaze had 2 fathers! But then, DAHH! I remembered that this is a Mpreg fic! LOL I totally forgot about that! sorry ...And just a little question, is there only males shifters or is there females as well?? Just curious! lol ^^

Thanks alot for the story! I enjoyed it so far! I can't wait for more! *hugs*