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by Jetfire

schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't quite remember this other character but he sounds evil enough. I liked this ch with all the undercurrents it was hysterical.
person jen
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Orion... *giggle* ..he has no clue what's going on behind his back! This is so hilarious, I can't wait till he's pregnant - he will be in for quite a shock there! ^^
person Laith
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-Bows- It is lovely to actually have some one respond to my reviews. I thank you greatly.

Now cons- Smutty bits weren't as smutty as they could have been. But I'm a pervy little bastard so it could just be me.

Pros- Amazing chapter, very cute, until that mysterious creepy last bit oooh, the intrigue. xD If I weren't going to keep ready already that would make it so.

You're a good author, simple language, not flowery and flowy but it's nice. I really like it like that. I like the characters, good development, they're strong, their personalities and that, and you've kept true to them, good job. I really think it's funny how everyone's against Orion (Spelling?). Just a question- are there any women in this world? Or can all men just become pregnant, human or shifter or anything?

But, yes, excellent chapter, I really enjoyed it, please keep 'em coming! I was really worried you weren't going to continue xD
person Saminada
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooopps! Sorry I haven't R & R the last two updates before this one!

...I remember that I Bookmarked this at chapter 7 a while back but I REALLY don't remember seeing chap 8 at all! ><

Oh well, I read all three updates just now! Sorry! I don't read as often anymore! I try to keep up with all my stories but it seems that I can't! *sights* ...And I was pretty busy with exams too...

Anyways, I LOOOOOOOVE ur story so if I don't leave a review, it's probably 'cause I haven't read yet, NOT because I didn't like it! Oki? :D

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I'll say a bit on all three chapters. :D

Chap 7 was pure torture for poor Blaze! He wants Cuuuuuuuuuuubbbbbbbssssss!!!!! Give him what he wants before he goes nuts!!!! Muahahaha!!! XDD

Chap 8 ...Orion, you'll make a great PAPA! *hugs* And Catsun, what a little devil! hihi He's getting back at Orion now! *laughs*

Chap 9 CUBS for Blaze soon-to-come!!!! Muahaha!!! Poor poor Ori, he better get himself ready! And *smacks evil King in the face* I hope his plan fails... Is Ryka kept there without his will?? Is he a good guy? What will happen? O____o

Anyways, I hope I made you happy with this *blush* LOL =)

Can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the chapters! Loved them! hihi :D *hugs*
person Eremi22
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update!!! Please? I really like the story.I like the thought of little feet running around all over the place. He should have twins. that should irritate him *grins*
person Laith
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why hello there, I'm Laith. -Bows- In case you didn't guess from the name. I just started reading this fanfic and I must say bravo. It's cute, and not what I usually like in fanfics but I really like this one.

It's a great improvement from Boys, Bottoms and Babies, I must say. Which, while it had an interesting story was confusing and you switched tenses like crazy, which really irks me. But, as of yet, you haven't done too much of that, if any at all, in this fan fic. Though, I must admit, I wasn't looking too closely.

Good job, keep up the good work.
person Jae
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool beans. And no worries, I'm obsessed too.
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh you tease.

I'm kinda giddy with amusement about how everyone wants poor ol'Orion pregnant. Ah haha, I can't wait to find out what happens next. Oh sure, I can guess, but I sure would like to read Orion's reaction when he finds out that wasn't birth control. keep up the great work, can't wait for more.
person nea
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! :) Is Orion going to have more than one cub when he becomes pregnant? I definitely hope so. I can hardly wait til you update again! Keep up the good work! :D
person Ao
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, vomiting either means he's got a bug or is pregnant! XD I guess if Orian's already preggo it doesn't really matter if they have full blown sex anymore, right. :P ;D lol