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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww...I really like Corvin now. I hope he does get Ryka preggers; he's so adorable!
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Corvin sounds intriguing.
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snicker- when will orion find out that his plans have been defeated - Blaze and his uncle grins. now about Ryka- this is a fun story.
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol That's understandable, all authors suffer from periods of writer's block. This chapter was okay, more of a filler chapter than anything, but the ending was interesting. Blaze's talk of starting a war is really interesting, maybe it means a little angst ahead. D: Orion's Uncle is planning on changing their rules, which is a good thing, and the best part... a wedding! I'm sure Orion will just LOVE that!
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And so Blaze storms in with the intent to rescue his pregnant mate who remains oblivious to his dillema. It's going to be interesting to see how he finds out the truth...
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY lol i read like, half of this story today. I missed a lot of chapters o_o; I'm glad I found the story again though, and oho. I can't believe the King and Orien's mate would trick him like that! he'll be soooo pissed when he finds out XD
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bahahaha! The scene with Orion screaming as he ran with the bucket made me laugh xD
I love this story!
I love this story!
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must confess that I’ve never entertained the idea of mpreg as a good element to a story. You’ve proved otherwise, though. The concept was integrated in a way that it didn’t pose as too much of a distraction, quite refreshing, actually.
Congratulations on conforming me and I hope that you continue writing much more enjoyable pieces. Kudos.
Congratulations on conforming me and I hope that you continue writing much more enjoyable pieces. Kudos.
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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hope Blaze kicks evil king butt!! Bring on the butt kicking!!!
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-Hugs- Well I appreciate it no less.
This chapter was very very good, I really liked it. ^_^ Overall I think it's really great how you--
A) Don't base this fanfic around getting laid and sex and all that, ya know what I mean? Like the pinnacale of it all won't be them falling in love and having sex, it's something else completely and I LOVE where this is going. (PST-- About sex, would such a high royal family allow their son to have sex before marriage? I was going to ask about the whole gay thing then I realized that there didn't seem to be any women. There aren't, right? Oh, and question- Do all men have the capibility to reproduce? And why would the king stand to have his son copulate with a shifter if they're so frowned upon in that empire?)
B) You use the different aspects of each 'breed'. Like the wolves have that very powerful and driving sense of smell, that compels them to do or not do certain things, yet Orion has no clue to that at all. You keep that defined line, which I really like, your characters are seperate and definate, each even has their own way of speaking. Bravo, I really really like that.
And, as a side note- I RP (Role Play if you know what that is) this kind of stuff, including smut, all the time, so if you need help with it I'd be glad to lend a hand. XD Not to be cocky or anything. Just drop me an email (balloonbaboon@hotmail.com {Also MSN}) or AIM (emulover1345) some time and ask. Or if you just wanna chill and chat. I loooove talking to people who's stories I adore. Getting to know the master behind the art is half the fun.
Returning to the land over the rainbow,
Laith
This chapter was very very good, I really liked it. ^_^ Overall I think it's really great how you--
A) Don't base this fanfic around getting laid and sex and all that, ya know what I mean? Like the pinnacale of it all won't be them falling in love and having sex, it's something else completely and I LOVE where this is going. (PST-- About sex, would such a high royal family allow their son to have sex before marriage? I was going to ask about the whole gay thing then I realized that there didn't seem to be any women. There aren't, right? Oh, and question- Do all men have the capibility to reproduce? And why would the king stand to have his son copulate with a shifter if they're so frowned upon in that empire?)
B) You use the different aspects of each 'breed'. Like the wolves have that very powerful and driving sense of smell, that compels them to do or not do certain things, yet Orion has no clue to that at all. You keep that defined line, which I really like, your characters are seperate and definate, each even has their own way of speaking. Bravo, I really really like that.
And, as a side note- I RP (Role Play if you know what that is) this kind of stuff, including smut, all the time, so if you need help with it I'd be glad to lend a hand. XD Not to be cocky or anything. Just drop me an email (balloonbaboon@hotmail.com {Also MSN}) or AIM (emulover1345) some time and ask. Or if you just wanna chill and chat. I loooove talking to people who's stories I adore. Getting to know the master behind the art is half the fun.
Returning to the land over the rainbow,
Laith