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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not all of the dialogue is confusing, just some.
I found the scene of Blaze and Orion hilarious. Keep updating!
I found the scene of Blaze and Orion hilarious. Keep updating!
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July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes yes, update update!
What a fun story!
I'd complain that's it's going by TOO quickly! (See, I was lucky to have 13 chapters to gobble up all at once, but now? *sniffles*) ;9 lol, Aduial-san, yer not draggin' it oooooout. *teasing*
I think yer characters are very fun. The way you write too, it reads quickly, which I would think leaves us all wanting more and more. Greedy readers~
I can only think to describe the way you write as 'crisp'. Vivid but down to the moment and to the point. It's something you do well, so kudos for that. A think a challenge for you would be to draw out situations a little, but as the story has come so far, I think it's great.
And you have a really kute sense of humor, which adds to the characters and just makes the whole thing a delight to read.
So KUDOS for you~~ Kudos kudos~~~~~ <3
~about Reviews~ (might help)
i'm sorry that it seems less ppl are commenting/reading. especially with AdultFF (since there's no way to get notified when authors update), if the author has a hard time (and that's understandable) updating regularly, it could be a good idea to start up an mailing list (like Yahoo groups). Can send out an email to those that have joined so well all know when you update. Might be one way to pull in the kuuudos. :)
What a fun story!
I'd complain that's it's going by TOO quickly! (See, I was lucky to have 13 chapters to gobble up all at once, but now? *sniffles*) ;9 lol, Aduial-san, yer not draggin' it oooooout. *teasing*
I think yer characters are very fun. The way you write too, it reads quickly, which I would think leaves us all wanting more and more. Greedy readers~
I can only think to describe the way you write as 'crisp'. Vivid but down to the moment and to the point. It's something you do well, so kudos for that. A think a challenge for you would be to draw out situations a little, but as the story has come so far, I think it's great.
And you have a really kute sense of humor, which adds to the characters and just makes the whole thing a delight to read.
So KUDOS for you~~ Kudos kudos~~~~~ <3
~about Reviews~ (might help)
i'm sorry that it seems less ppl are commenting/reading. especially with AdultFF (since there's no way to get notified when authors update), if the author has a hard time (and that's understandable) updating regularly, it could be a good idea to start up an mailing list (like Yahoo groups). Can send out an email to those that have joined so well all know when you update. Might be one way to pull in the kuuudos. :)
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha Blaze and Orion make me laugh!
I loved this update muchly!
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I loved this update muchly!
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is interesting. But, I find some of the dialogue kind of confusing at times. I hope you update this on a regular basis, just as how you are with Angel's Song.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..I never knew that mpreg could be so great to read! Thnx so much for writing this, I can't wait for your next chapter. I love your style, it's sort of the same as Angel's song. Update when you can, you're doing a winderful job writing this.
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you thank you. I was pleasantly suprised to see such a huge portion of the ch devoted to Corvin. What a man, what a man, what a mighty mighty good man! I'm really happy for Ryka's happy ending. Now the only thing to complete the pretty pic is a few wee ones?
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for Orion to find out he's pregnant. Hope it's as comical as I think it will be.
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loooove this story! Blaze and Orion are absolutely adorable, and I'm curious about Corvin as well. Fab!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story!
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! Hope the big bad king gets his comeuppence. Glad Ryka has someone to love him. Hope he can get pregnant.