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for Burning the stars

by Jetfire

schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1. Bait, hook, sinker, and line. You've got me that deep with just your first chapter, I'm afraid yet excited to read the rest of what you've uploaded. Definitely got yourself a fan here!
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2. ROFL!! OMG! My tummy hurts now~ Orion running through the halls chasing after Blaze in all his naked glory is so dang funny.
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3. I'm going to be late to work for getting caught up in your story. Maybe squeeze in one more chapter? Orion has no clue as to what he's getting himself into. Can't wait for the outcome of it all.
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4. Woah~ I really like your concept of how they can mature faster after their first mating. *bangs head against the table* I need to head to work and now I've got something to look forward to!
person kylee123
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending. I am glad that Rafe showed up to help Orion out and to watch over Blaze. I love Orion and Blaze was such an endearing character. I hope they will live happily ever after with their new son. I can just imagine the antics that Rhun and Blaze will get into together.
person kylee123
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is hilarious. Blaze is such a charmer. He is a definite prince. Orion did not stand a chance. I just finished chapter 4 and I am really enjoying myself.
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I’m getting a huge sense of déjà vu as I read this (o wo) I’ve either read it before, and don’t realize it, or it reminds me of another story I’ve read. Either way, I am loving this story! Hehe, I decided to check out your page while dinner cooks ( it smells amazing Dx ) And now, I shall review as I read, whenever the urge strikes me. I really like your writing, and the story is great!
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I -know- that I’ve read this before. And I think it was before I knew you. Odd xD But cool. Cause I can’t remember if this was complete at the time that I read it. Anyways, I totally remember chapter 5. Poor Orion, all confused and worried. I kind of liked the idea of a bottom Blaze, but the turn of events is interesting.
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I meant chapter 6 Cx With the whole ‘CHILDREN?’ bit. I am against the plans to make Orion pregnant when he doesn’t want it .__. But that’s me. I get angry when such things happen, to a certain degree. I feel sorry for him, and it’s mean that everyone is turning against him. Even if they just want cute babies. But, it’s a good story all the same ^w^
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Ryka, him and Corvin are so cute together! I’m so glad he found someone! I’m a little disappointed that Orion gave in so easily to his pregnancy. He had a little anger fit, and just let it go. I would have liked to have seen him more pissed off, and to have given Blaze the cold shoulder for at least a little while, like he deserved. But oh well, at least a happy ending came of it all! :’D Yay for the mean king being defeated! I really like this story, Aduial!

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