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for Burning the stars

by Jetfire

schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw so cute! I wish it had an epilogue though. It was so touching that their little boy came to get him when he couldn't wake up.
person renee
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a charming story. I felt sad for not being able to take part in the chapter-by-chapter's review as each chapter was published. It deserved nothing less for the humor and plot bits. I love all the doting father, papa, and uncle but Rafe especially because he was a crazy-killer and kickass papa when his cub was threatened. Orion and Blaze, needless to say, were undeniably the draw to the story. Blaze with his brashness and overexuberance towards anything Orion and Orion with his failed attempt at trying to outsmart Blaze's baby-making plan. Orion's futile resistance to bearing cubs got me laughing so hard. It was so cute when you had their baby boy went in and rescue his father. I went aww and aww so many times over that.

16 chapters went by so quickly and I wish I could see them again. I want to see how Orion (thinks he) is going to make Blaze pay because Orion had to carry the baby without his "regular back and foot massage and daily blow jobs" (that cracked me up). With Blake conscious, it's not hard for imagine a relieved Orion would say that Blaze went into an induced coma just to get out of his punishment.

I enjoyed reading this story a lot and was thoroughly entertained by all the characters' antics. I just want to thank you for putting so much thought into your work (it shows), and for thinking about your readers as you write and for writing.

Looking forward to your future work,
renee
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6. Hehehehehehehe~ Blaze's father is funny and Orion is so going to get pregnant.
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7. There. Orion's now pregnant and can't do a thing about it. >:3
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8. ROFL! Everyone's out to get Orion. Poor guy, he's not going to know what hit him. xD
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9. "hot wild sex and baby making time" ROFL! I wonder if the evil king's plan will fall through? I bet King Siccus will be able to take down Ryka and then-smacks self-have "hot wild sex and baby making time". XD
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10. Woot! Gogogogogogogogogogogogogogogogogogogo!! I've got an adrenaline high from just this chapter alone and I can't help but-but-but-but-but-anticipate what will happen.
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11. ROFL! Peeing bucket! A peeing bucket as a weapon! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA-snort-BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-wheeze- *faints*
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12. “I'm not smirking Orion, you're hallucinating.” "I’m taking you to our bedroom, so that I can have my wild way with you.” What more could I say?
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5. ROFL!! Oh I can't stop laughing!