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for Hunted

by Yaoichi

person Chloeknz
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this story has a lot to offer, I'm curious to see what you have planned. I can't get past the first couple chapters though. I'm sorry, but the POV shifts without transition are too much. I'd really like to read more so please think about making it easier for the reader to see who's POV the story is in.
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg poor Rex!! I really hate people like that (characters I know but there are folks like that in this world and its heart breaking) I do like your story though ^-^
person romanticfae
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loveing it :)
person Mickelan
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaayy!!! New chapter!! Kyun and Julian were sooo hot.
Julian's a masseur... that makes sense. It fits well with his gentle, relaxed personality, too.
Thank you for writing. ^^ Great story!
person Mickelan
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D You rock for writing this story. I just read all of it in one go, and I'm addicted.
I have to say I love Kyun, and Nele and Kiyoshi are just so adorable together.
I can't help getting curious about Luo and Rick...
Looking very forward to your next update. Thank you so much for writing!
person BennyPeace
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so this was one of those stories that the summary really didn't appeal to me and I just read it because there were no other stories that seemed interesting enough to read. Boy was I wrong about it. I love this story so much. I'm Korean too so that makes me really happy. Honestly though, the plot is wayyy better than it seemed and it's actually probably one of the best storylines I've read yet.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I love Nele's roommate! Aww...I love kitty's! :D:D:D:D Great chapter!
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. They better keep their dicks in their pants. Unless...Maybe I was wrong about this read head...
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was getting excited too...Shame on you. Getting my hopes up..:P But hopefully you'll make it up to me in the future?! RIGHT?!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was quick!!! But now I'm confused. Who is this Tele(?) person. I love red heads. Lol. Much better than my own black with dyed red streaks. :D:D:D:D Anyhoo. I'm tired and its only 6 in the freaking afternoon. So I'm gonna go pass out now.