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for Battle of the Heart

by ethereal

person mw0627
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes I remember this fic, it is -old-, but the late update is appreciated. I think I remember most of what happened to this point...vaguely...
person smint45
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absoloutly love this story!!!! I so hope you will update soon!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!! I'm totally fascinated by you story ideas!!!! And who is the mysterious woman that rescued him??? And this prediction she had that Lamar wil be important!!! I somehow got the feeling that the story really starts just now!!!! I'm so exited I can't wait for more to come!!!! by the way is he spelled Anni or Aani??? In chappie 8 you spell him sometimes the one sometimes the other!!! It kind of confiused me! Well i totally love you charas!!! Gabe is just adorable athough I somehow get to hate the humans ^^ An Now Aani is Rias father really confiusing!!! Shouldn't Rias be a golden fox then?? And I totally love Aryan!!! i hope he comes out of his shell sometime!!! i can't wait for more of this wonderful story!!! In my opinion this could develop into an long epic story!!!! I hope to hear from you soon!!!!!
person kylee123
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it is awesome that you are continuing it after all this time. I really like the direction you are taking with the magical fairy woman. Very interesting. I wonder if Rias knows that Anai is his father. I hope you update soon.
person chart451
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you are continuing the story. I'd given up hope. I loved this chapter!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. It's such an interesting idea. The characters are so different from anything else I've read. Keep up the good work.
person Buumkin
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw I really like this story... The concept is very intruiging and I am beginning to love the characters more and more :) Keep writing!
person chart451
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Terrific! I can't wait to see what Lamar will do.
person Saminada
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O____o WOW!!! this is one awesome story! Why didn't I see it before?!?! Argh! >__<
Oh well! I read it now and I just LOOOOOOOOOOVED it!! XD It's really cool and I like how everything went out so far!
I can't wait to see the upcoming attack! I hope all will go well! T___T

Anyways, thanks ALOT for the fantastic story!! I can't wait to read more of this! *hugs* :P
person chart451
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been enjoying your story and have been checking back daily hoping for an update :)
Hope you are still working on this story.
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I can't wait to find out what happens next!Your characters are really strong and you can't help but love them! Looking forward to the next chapter and I hope its soom :)