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for Over the Edge

by blindcorner

schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEP! OMG, this is freakin' scareh! I'm on the edge of my seat! You can't leave me like this!!!! lol Please update soon, 'kay? I love the character development and the flickers of past memories that explains why Kiernan is the way he is, but I bet there's more to it! lol *is clutching at the edge of computer chair as we speak*
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not gonna lie, Brent's creepy. But Kiernan is sort of going into panic overdrive about this online stalker situation. Like the internal thought process for Kiernan though. I mean mega-emo-angst boy but it's well done. That vanilla comment though...who calls work vanilla? I feel for the kid, that's unhelpful and peculiar.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow. Please continue with this, it's awesome.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! PLEASE!!! I BEGGETH THEE!!!! lol :)
person Sekre
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Freaky chapter all around. Looking forward to their meeting though, and hopefully some explanations.
person Sekre
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love angsty teens. x)
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i reaaaaaaaaaaaally like your story so far. and i figured i should tell you. keep it up! :)
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I'm curious as to what happens next. Please continue!!
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
K. Brent is hot. This story is hot, really. I guess I'm just an angst-fan!