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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my , I have I can read your novel , it's so good ( this story ) I love your story , so good ^^
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is it over or will there be more???
ASOTA
ASOTA
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you everyone for the wonderful feedback and kind words. They've made my day infinitely better (I won't go into details, but today wasn't so jolly, heh). I shall respond to some comments now... that I felt needed a following up.
Nathaniel: In response to Nikita being an ass, allow my motherly instincts to defend for a moment. Yes, I know. He really is an idiot, but throughout the story there is a huge sense of desperation and a twisted form of love that he shows for his brother. Is it right? No, not really. He's a spoiled heir, he is used to getting the things he wants, and this just didn't turn out how everything else does. He does have anger and emotional issues as well, which is always nice and depressing XD And yes, I will be writing a WAFFy, consensual story now, thanks to all of the support from everyone. :) Perhaps something even longer than a one-shot, which I seem to be so fond of lately.
Sekre and Anon: Thank you for your interest in my novel. However, due to copyright laws and the like, I will not be posting my novel anywhere online, at least, as a whole. I might post chunks and portions of it on my livejournal, which is listed on my profile here. If you want updates there, you must friend me ;) Otherwise I hope to publish it someday, and would like the first publishing rights to myself :)
Mr. Nice Girl: Hahaha, welcome to my world. I wrote it! And yes, I do find a little bit of it pretty sexy (the boys themselves are nothing to sneeze at), although I really do feel for them and the emotional trauma they both go through. In a strange, psychological way, it is rather hot. Don't quote me on that, though XD! I in no way find rape hot, but there is a certain charm when it's two brothers, and princes on top of it all. Don't feel bad, it made me smile. It's just fiction, after all!
Jess: Thank you so much! Sadly, this is probably all I will be writing regarding Nikita and Mattias. There are other characters in the novel that I would like to explore, though, and are not as controversial *snerk* and more consensual. Hopefully you will enjoy those in the future ^^
Thanks again, everyone.
Nathaniel: In response to Nikita being an ass, allow my motherly instincts to defend for a moment. Yes, I know. He really is an idiot, but throughout the story there is a huge sense of desperation and a twisted form of love that he shows for his brother. Is it right? No, not really. He's a spoiled heir, he is used to getting the things he wants, and this just didn't turn out how everything else does. He does have anger and emotional issues as well, which is always nice and depressing XD And yes, I will be writing a WAFFy, consensual story now, thanks to all of the support from everyone. :) Perhaps something even longer than a one-shot, which I seem to be so fond of lately.
Sekre and Anon: Thank you for your interest in my novel. However, due to copyright laws and the like, I will not be posting my novel anywhere online, at least, as a whole. I might post chunks and portions of it on my livejournal, which is listed on my profile here. If you want updates there, you must friend me ;) Otherwise I hope to publish it someday, and would like the first publishing rights to myself :)
Mr. Nice Girl: Hahaha, welcome to my world. I wrote it! And yes, I do find a little bit of it pretty sexy (the boys themselves are nothing to sneeze at), although I really do feel for them and the emotional trauma they both go through. In a strange, psychological way, it is rather hot. Don't quote me on that, though XD! I in no way find rape hot, but there is a certain charm when it's two brothers, and princes on top of it all. Don't feel bad, it made me smile. It's just fiction, after all!
Jess: Thank you so much! Sadly, this is probably all I will be writing regarding Nikita and Mattias. There are other characters in the novel that I would like to explore, though, and are not as controversial *snerk* and more consensual. Hopefully you will enjoy those in the future ^^
Thanks again, everyone.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovedit would really like to see more
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. Your characters are interesting and the chapter was well written, I'd love to see the whole story connected with this one-shot. It's a well thought out idea for a story and this one-shot was one in a way that draws the reader in and makes you want to know the rest of the story behind it. I think you have something that would be well received here. Your amount of reviews will be less since you got it that only logged in readers can review, but I think you'll see a high read count. I'd like to read more on it. Keep up the good work this was a wonderful way to introduce you work to the readers here at AFF. Hope to see more from you and welcome.
littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Piper (like the oldest witch in "Charmed"? ;-))!
I hope Nikita (a beautiful name, by the way) is going to get a sword - for proper suicide. He loves Mattias? My ass, that idiot is either completely nuts or has serious issues with reality (or both). I hope Mattias gets better soon.
And with that comment I guess you can see my problem to properly review your fic. I don't like rape (and for me it definitely was rape and not NC, but I think it's difficult to draw the border between both... And I don't like NC neither...) and therefore kinda rushed through the text - more like a skim through, really. What I did get was that your style and the description are fine - but for more I'd have to read more intensely.
But I propose a deal: Now, that I at least have reviewed, you write that WAFFy story and I review that one more detailed. *grins* Deal?
Anyway, greetings
Nathaniel
I hope Nikita (a beautiful name, by the way) is going to get a sword - for proper suicide. He loves Mattias? My ass, that idiot is either completely nuts or has serious issues with reality (or both). I hope Mattias gets better soon.
And with that comment I guess you can see my problem to properly review your fic. I don't like rape (and for me it definitely was rape and not NC, but I think it's difficult to draw the border between both... And I don't like NC neither...) and therefore kinda rushed through the text - more like a skim through, really. What I did get was that your style and the description are fine - but for more I'd have to read more intensely.
But I propose a deal: Now, that I at least have reviewed, you write that WAFFy story and I review that one more detailed. *grins* Deal?
Anyway, greetings
Nathaniel
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I hope you keep us informed of your novel's progress.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is it horrible to say that I loved this? Because I do. It's very well written and unfortunately, very sexy. Sometimes I think I'm sick for liking this stuff but I don't care! Beautiful story.
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this story was great! i feel kinda sorry for Mattias and in a weird way sorry for Nikita. you should post ur novel on AFF or u should continue this story
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing.
please tell me there's more!?
please tell me there's more!?