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for Hairless world

by choticati

schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a cliffie! great stuff! I feel kinda weird always reviewing but o well i am getting into it alot. Keep watching out for stuff like sentence structure and verb tenses its sometimes difficult to follow.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again very interesting continuation of the story. However, I was kinda distracted by the writting style.
But i really enjoyed it and cant wait for more
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I find its a very inventive original story and I really enjoy where it is going
Cannot wait for more!
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is just about to get good. can't wait for more :)