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well this is a long shot in the dark but I figured it never hurts to ask; so I wonder if you have any intentions on continuing this story cause quite frankly i'm crazy interested in it. I would really enjoying seeing how things progress. if you do that'd be awesome, if not then i'll be a little sad but no less intrigued. it's totally up to you; no pressure. cool story either way. laters.

i love it and really really with you could update. Please...

This is really interesting. I hope to read more soon :)

VERY AWESOME!!!! MORE PLEASE MORE!

just found this site and read your story and find it very interesting and would love to read more, please update soon and keep up the good work

Another good chapter. I like the details you given. Keep those up!

Another good fic is coming I can see ^^ Can't wait to see how this devloups as it continues. It's already caught my interest like your other multi-chap fics.

awesome start! very interesting. cant wait to find out the savior.

Good opening chapter. I myself aren't very good at bouncing off first person stories so I try to keep my work in that area to a minimum. I can safely say you nailed it. I also like this idea of young girls stepping out of a 'comfort zone' and being exposed to the horrors of a 'real, outside world'. A bit like Spirited Away, Alice in Wonderland or the Wizard of Oz. It's nice to see someone else express a similiar interest.

No F/F as yet, but I'm guessing the person who saved your protagonist is the other end of that equation. In which case I'm looking forward to future chapters. Two thumbs up thus far.