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I absoloutly love this story!!!! Thanky a lot for the update!!!! Too bad I didn't read this story since 2008!!! I would have given you a review for every chappie!!!! But anyway that goes from here on!!! I would be very happy to be notified when you update!!! (here is my mail: kuraitenschi@web.de) Now back to the story!!! Was Garret a Draconian or an elf in his former life?? I didn't quite get that!!! And is Allen the incarnation of his former lover?? It somehow seems that way!!!!! I really hope Garret will come in time to help Aleen and to rescue the draconian girl!!!! Will there be some slash between Allen and Garret in the near future?? I really hope so!!!!! Can Allen shift into a dragon???? Or is it impossible for him cause he is half werewolf????? Can he change into a wolf?? Well he seems to have the magic of the draconians!!! Without using incarnations and all!!!!!! I really hope they will get out there save!!!!! And I really hope that you will update soon!!!!! Hope to see you next time!!!!!

a great start. don't be discouraged if there are not a lot of reviews yet. Some, like me, like to read a few chapters before writing reviews. That said I can not wait to see how you develop the characters.

please don't feel that your writing or this chapter (which is my favorite so far!) are inadequate, because that is sooooo far from the truth. i am enjoying the story immensely and am a big fan. you've got a wonderful story going on here :)

This is nicely put together. I am really impressed with your story telling ability. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hey there... don't worry about this chapter. It's not bad at all. Just keep in mind that it wasn't meant to further the story, the only point of this chapter and its flashbacks is to enhance the setting, not the plot. The sticking point is that you can only do that a couple of times, unless you plan on a 50+ chapter story. As long as the next chapter furthers the plot more than the story of the past, I'd say that this last chapter was perfectly placed and of excellent quality. Thanks!

That was another great chapter. The flashback weren't too bad. It gave us the opportunity to get to know Garret's present life as well as his past life. I wonder what his adopted parents knew that he didn't. Update soon!

This is a really good story. There are so many ways that it can develop, it'll be great to see in which direction you take it. The only thing I coulp find wrong were a few typos here and there. I hope you write more soon!

I can't wait to see where you take this story!!

I absolutely love the premise of this story. I've never seen a story before where the present world feels so affected by wars that have gone before. The fleeing from the spirits and the ghostly elves sent shivers down my spine and I can't wait to read more. I hope you get writing again soon! :)