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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww...She really likes him and now...well its too late. Hes all Lukes. So this evil guy Ra...he was the one who killed kiyoshis parents huh? That sick bastard...Update soon! Geting good!
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for more. carry on the good work!!
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh man, the plot is getting all twisty and intense! i can't wait to find out what happens next, Luke seems to be getting super jealous!
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh oh trouble in the household
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
POST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
BYE BYE
BYE BYE
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY NICE KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
BYE BYE
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is good one keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knew something was up with Chen! So....since Kyoshi is human Luke hates him for it? How sad. this is an awesome story by the way! Can't wait for the next update!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Evil evil cliffie.
Curiosity killed the cat i know. But also the cat has 9 lives.
Give me my next chapter.
:)))))
Curiosity killed the cat i know. But also the cat has 9 lives.
Give me my next chapter.
:)))))