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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kill ra kill him and don't let him kill
someone els
keep going an post soon
bye bye
someone els
keep going an post soon
bye bye
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, now Ra has killed one of his own, there will be no stopping him.
And Kiyoshi, he is going to have to learn to live with the new Luke, if there is going to be any hope of any of them living to tell the tale of their encounter with the madman that Ra has become.
Aw, loved the touching scene between Topper and Akina. I hope they become an item. Found it a little hard to believe though, that Officer Wakehiko didn't put up a fight to remain with his slain officers....Now those left behind are going to be wondering just what went on in that room, and where the others are....
But still, loving the story, and eagerly looking to see what happens next!
And Kiyoshi, he is going to have to learn to live with the new Luke, if there is going to be any hope of any of them living to tell the tale of their encounter with the madman that Ra has become.
Aw, loved the touching scene between Topper and Akina. I hope they become an item. Found it a little hard to believe though, that Officer Wakehiko didn't put up a fight to remain with his slain officers....Now those left behind are going to be wondering just what went on in that room, and where the others are....
But still, loving the story, and eagerly looking to see what happens next!
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
BYE BYE
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How is Ra going to ruin Kiyoshi, just by visiting him in work? Is he hoping to push Luke over the edge? Get a reaction that will cost Kiyoshi his job? But, what will that achieve?
I'm glad Officer Wakehiko is on Luke and Kiyoshi's side. That proves he does indeed love Kiyoshi like a son. Bravo to him, lol
And Chen...Ohhhhh, she really ought to get away from the madman, while she still has the chance!
I'm glad Officer Wakehiko is on Luke and Kiyoshi's side. That proves he does indeed love Kiyoshi like a son. Bravo to him, lol
And Chen...Ohhhhh, she really ought to get away from the madman, while she still has the chance!
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What???? What has Luke become? A monster? An uncontrollable beast? That can't be right, because he's protecting his friends, risking his own life for theirs, preventing Ra from hurting any more people. I don't think Kiyoshi should be panicking so much. The love Luke has for him is obviously still shining through...
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im REALLY getting tired of Ra and Chen the Bitch. I hope Luke takes care of them soon. I hope Ra doesn't hurt Kiyoshi! Please update more soon!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
post soon
bye
bye
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no....Officer Wakehiko is not going to give them a lecture on the birds and bees is he? Its a little too late for that lol.
Aw poor Akina, to find out like that, that Kiyoshi is into 'other things'...I hope Topper will be able to console her broken heart.
Oh wow but...gossip is sure going to spread around the police force now. Luke and Kiyoshi won't be able to show their faces for a long time, without some serious leg pulling being done lol...
Aw poor Akina, to find out like that, that Kiyoshi is into 'other things'...I hope Topper will be able to console her broken heart.
Oh wow but...gossip is sure going to spread around the police force now. Luke and Kiyoshi won't be able to show their faces for a long time, without some serious leg pulling being done lol...
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So what is Ra trying to say? That Luke will be cruel and unkind to Kiyoshi? That Luke will become a bad puppet owner, like him?
I don't thinkkkkkkk so, lol
I don't thinkkkkkkk so, lol
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good
but don't let luke be a bastard to his puppet
keep up the good work and post soon
bye bye
but don't let luke be a bastard to his puppet
keep up the good work and post soon
bye bye