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by Lunarwench

person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This ruled. I love these characters. If you ever want to write more stories with them, I would NOT object at all! This is just so cute and sexy. Finch means well... And what a unique punishment, too. I love your work... You never disappoint!
person Sekre
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how sweet!! The things people do for love.
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Spike was amazed. In horrible aroused pain, but still amazed."

....that, right there, is the best line ever. I loved this story, it was a riot. I love how Spike is such a big, intimidating animal, but when it comes to Finch he turns into a complete softy, freaking classic. And Finch was great too a sweet little thing with fangs, you really don't get that much. A great little one-shot with a great twist too. Go, Finch. Awesome work once again Lunarwench ^-^
person janas
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dat was really good
i love da whole 'pushy uke' thing...its great
ermn...shame its a one shot but i cant wait for an update on rooftop...