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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I thought it was both sexy and hilarious. Daniel at first didn't seem like the type to want to ever settle down. I would love to read more on how they met and decided to live together.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahah oh my I never laughed so hard. Yes yes please write more about them. Hurry before his dick falls off. what a wonderful wicked sense of humor you have, and I really do hope you do a follow up on this one shot, just want to know if Daniel did indeed learn his lesson. Gotta go I can't stop laughing and people are staring at me. hahahahahahaha!!!!!!!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how you do it, but I don't think I've read a story of yours yet which is anything less than brilliant, lol. I really enjoyed this one and it'd be interesting to read a prequel or sequel, the characters are fascinating.
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
prequel please!!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would like a prequel ^.^
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love al your stories but this one is really great~! I think It should be continued ^^ but even if you're not planning on doing that I still loved it! ^.~v
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have some real talent for characterization. I really enjoyed this story. Can’t help but hope for a second chappie, but hey you’re the author ^_~
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello Lunarwench!
What a cruel but the same time "funny" story. Finch (Why do I have to think about "American Pie" when I hear that name?!) is quite the tormentor and his punishment is quite mean - to think that this is a one (!) "shot" (Though the onliest shot was the one that Daniel had in the bar :D)! But all for his future and all in the name of love, hmm?
Anyway, I like this story very much! Thanks for writing and posting it and I'll read your other stories soon!
Nathaniel
What a cruel but the same time "funny" story. Finch (Why do I have to think about "American Pie" when I hear that name?!) is quite the tormentor and his punishment is quite mean - to think that this is a one (!) "shot" (Though the onliest shot was the one that Daniel had in the bar :D)! But all for his future and all in the name of love, hmm?
Anyway, I like this story very much! Thanks for writing and posting it and I'll read your other stories soon!
Nathaniel
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO THAT WAS SO FUCKING FUNNY. :)
I thought they were the perfect couple!
Finch, pretty and demanding, taming a "fierce"one like Spike. lmfao lmfao lmfoa. I want to read mooooore! ;A;
Your writing is top notch! :DD
I thought they were the perfect couple!
Finch, pretty and demanding, taming a "fierce"one like Spike. lmfao lmfao lmfoa. I want to read mooooore! ;A;
Your writing is top notch! :DD
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very amusing, and very aptly named I might add. I love the way the tone of the first half of the story is completely thrown out the window as soon as Finch appears.
And I can’t forget Finch’s pearl of wisdom at the end. ‘This isn’t porn.’ Lol.
And I can’t forget Finch’s pearl of wisdom at the end. ‘This isn’t porn.’ Lol.