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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck? Hahahah he died of a heart attack. HHAHA best thing ever. I love you!
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Serves him right, that dirty pig. Great story, very well written :). Too bad its a one-shot, I would love to here what happens to the poor boy. Oh well, I let my imagination make up my own happy ending...lol.
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor kid, but serves that old man right! I hope you'll write another oneshot only on the boy's perspective.
Thanks for writing! ^__^
Thanks for writing! ^__^
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was intense!
Very good description of the man and his emotions.
The only thing that could have made it better was to have more of the boy’s emotions. But I understand (Or think I understand) that you wanted to make it a bit one-sided.
Loved the ending, it was great.
BCM
Very good description of the man and his emotions.
The only thing that could have made it better was to have more of the boy’s emotions. But I understand (Or think I understand) that you wanted to make it a bit one-sided.
Loved the ending, it was great.
BCM