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omgz!! T^T That was so sad =dabs her eyes with tissue= But is this really the end? I mean, Kegan dies at the end but he's a vampire right? Did they really die? That last sentence made me think that Alex turned into a vampire or something since he felt his teeth grow but gahh that was so sad! Anyways, it was a pretty engaging story :D

*sobs hystericly*
I cant believe it's over, though I did see where this was going.
Needless to say your english didn't bother me, you can still read though it and it didnt take away from the plot. People are just whiners.

Makes me sad that it's all over now.
*dabs at eyes with tissues*

Cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

You've heard it before. Your english isn't that great, but if I read it outloud, I know what the heck you are trying to do. Intriquing story. The harshness of the 'other' world, especially for a pet and a psuedo vampire makes me cringe. The dog sex, eeeewww. Still read it though. (Cringe....yipe)

I have stopped reading some stories because the grammar and spelling is bad. But this has...something. I know that I am guilty of rushing my writing but it's because I have an emotional attachment to my characters and doing horrible things to them is distressing and I want it overwith as soon as possible. I am going to assume that you do the same thing.

Keep plotting and moving forward. I'm just wondering when the little pet is going to be turned, or if he is just going to be put out of his misery.

Kiix

*sobs hystaricly*
Poor Alex.
Poor Kegan! he just got 'better' and now Alex isnt doing well.
*gasps* I know where this is heading.... *hums a song*

*passes out from drama over load*

Come on Alex, option A or B? And damn you Kegan for putting him on the spot!!

*waits for another chapter*

I love your story and now I feel so sorry for Alex.
But I saw something on your writing ( hope you don't get upset) - you use a lot the word "agents". Isn't the correct for "against"? Sorry
Patiently waiting for an update

wow your updating this really quick like!! xD
i'm so sad that he's back in his world now. . . suppose it's for the better right now though.

*selfishly awaits next chapter*

What! Nooooooo!! He cant give up...
Kegan is bad assed, he can't just let his evil mind twin win!!
It wouldnt be right.
It'd destroy the fabric of the world!!

*starts crying*

I await the next chapter on my toes.

I didn't expect the Bronie Alex bit. It was good though. I wonder how that relationship will mesh with Keagan Alex.