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Thank you! A gentle, touching, romantic, enthralling story, with a nice pace and a very elegant ending.

I really enjoyed the reading, the universe is nice and interesting though I was a little startled with the flashbacks, until I understood what was all about. Also, in my opinion the ship voyage was a little unclear and abrupt: the sailors had some pirate clothing but the main character does not question the new setting but stays daydreaming about the vampire and denies the rather obvious dramatic change... However, the writing has a nice captivating flow in general and the happenings do not seem to have many hard edges.

I can't believe it's over. NOOOOO!! I want to know what happens to Alex!!

I really enjoyed this, thanks.

I started crying at the end. Really badly....

this was so sad i loved this story though and thank you you for posting it it was so sweet. and i wish i could draw out some of the scenes that are i your story.thank you for posting.

Hello there ^^
I love your story dear i reread it after finding it on my favs. I have to give it THE best score i can.
I have to ask tho, because i thought i remember you doing a follow up to this story. Im sorry if im wrong, it has been a while since i read your story. But i thought you did have another story for this after you ended it here, but i cant recall. Please tell me if there/was/might be because it is truly driving me nuts. Im in love with the story, and all of your boys<3333 ~<333

Oh fyi: tredwyer@hotmail.com so you know where to contact me~

Do you need a beta for this story? Like, to edit the first chapters? If so, I'm so open it hurts. You can e-mail me at OddlyAppropriate@hotmail.com

Hi. I just tried to read your story. At first I was horrifed to see that you had only twenty reviews for something that's been seen over 7,000 times, but then I started reading. I honestly couldn't get past the first couple of paragraphs. It had to do with the formation of the sentences; 1 out of four of your sentences made actual sense to me. Because your story has twenty one chapters, I'm sure there is a good plot, but I don't know if there will be many who will be able to get though all of them. If you would take the time to edit your story, I'm sure this would be a great story, but until you do so, you'll get people who start reading and then leave half way through the first page. Sorry if this is too harsh, but it is truth.

I enjoyed this story. I don't know if it's finished or there is more to come, but I liked it.

There were a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, you might want to have someone beta read and edit your work before you post it.

The plot was good and the overall story was exciting. The ending was sad, but undone. Is Alex a vamp now? Is Keagan dead?

I really would like to know more. Perhaps a sequel is in order?

Thank you for posting this story.