rate_review Reviews

un cominezo muy en bruto y un final feliz, muy bien escrito, ana maria

What. the. fuck.

First, I think you should move this to the vampire section, 'cause her master's a vampire and all. Next, I don't exactly know what it is, but the story just seemed... bland. It was okay, but not great. Add in a little more about the master. Like, out of all the whores he could have had, he wanted to spend eternity with her. Or, why was he angry when he tasted the evidence of her use if he was the one who allowed it? Also, you don't need to use the parentheses. Just write it.