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I'm glad there was more! hih, I really should have voiced my suspicion to you about the chapter being cut, but sometimes my brain chooses not to work either. *snickers* Oh, and other thing, you could also take away the option of letting only registered users review, sometimes it helps with reviews :P Um, what else, have you thought about drawing pictures of these guys if you haven't already? Would love to see.

hm, yay, I want more! :P Short it was, yes, but it woke my interest *innocent smile* Sooo... post that second chapter :D

ah, yup wish something and it will come true... FAST :D hih, but it was short, write more! or I'll get my whip and spank you to write more *muahahaa*
Er...it's early and I'm on my first cup of coffee, it's my excuse of being weird, nod.

CHAPTER 1
Good start, Mistress,
Don't worry about the "slashy parts", just tell the story the way you see it.
The first chapter is promissing of a good read :)I'd like to see the next one when it's posted.

Caught my attention :)