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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Espen's brother is terrible! I feel like bashing his head in. Sorry or not. XD. This story is trickling along so slowly and just driving me nuts with anxiety. It's not fair.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't see how th chara of the twin contributes to this story.
cliche,also.
but i want to read more.
cliche,also.
but i want to read more.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story so much, it's freaking genius! *_* hih,
That guy gives me the creeps though, which I think you are aiming for. It's good that we learn more about him, little by little; sexually abused as a child? Fits the type, nod.
I was also happy for this delightfully long chapter ^_^
I want more, more, MORE! =D
That guy gives me the creeps though, which I think you are aiming for. It's good that we learn more about him, little by little; sexually abused as a child? Fits the type, nod.
I was also happy for this delightfully long chapter ^_^
I want more, more, MORE! =D
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pure genius! I really hope you update soon. :D
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This really is good. The main character is such a tease! I can't wait to see him fuck Espen XD Please hurry it up!!!!
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is going to give me a heart attack by teasing me so much. I simply love it, though. Any story with a coral snake is a good one. I'm so waiting for them to kidnap Espen, you have no idea. Keep the updates coming; you made my day. I've been sick as hell for most of it and this was like a bowl of chicken soup for the mind.
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! You know I was waiting :) And I do enjoy this, you're a teaser, I quite like it, it keeps me interested, though at this point I'm already very interested and crave for more, so you have me hooked even without the teasing;)
Please updare soon!
-C-
Please updare soon!
-C-
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grat chapter ^_^ I meant to review earlier, but I was so tired then. Was it a dream or was this already happening? or like had happened? The italics got me wondering. I feel sorry for Espen, but good that the man is showing some sings of humanity. Hopefully we get to read more soon.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh,pepa this story has potential.
don't forget to mix the violence with an insight in a kidnappers mind.
and give us slash.
don't forget to mix the violence with an insight in a kidnappers mind.
and give us slash.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is Mr. Nice Girl. I finally registered. Anyway, it's good to see that he has a human side! I can't wait to see more... I'm looking forward to seeing his first encounter with everyone's favourite pretty metal vocalist.