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for In the Heat of the Moment

by LonleyMistress

person momo
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay, this is just great... it's been a long time since you've updated your story but if you could continue it I would be die of joy.
person Kolgrim
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, why did it stop there!? I'm on the ede of my seat! *sigh* I want more! *pouts* hurry up! :D Hih, nah, I understand you are busy, but it won't stop me from asking updates *muahaaaa* Ok, yes I will wait, I want to see how this goes! Thanks for the update *hugs* :)
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Shit, I had this long review, and AFF ate it! Ok, Reader's Digest version: This was my first story I ever read on here last March. I read the whole thing in one shot and never heard about it again! I'm so glad you updated!

This is such a great story; so well written. Great characters, plot, dialogue, etc. That Colin is a sick motherfucker. What a dangerous psychopath he is!

Amazing story! I can't wait to find out what happens when Espen walks in the room! Great job!
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I haven's seen this in AGES!!!!!! I'm so glad you updated!!! I read this story so long ago, I think I have to re-read it!

Ok, I'll review when I'm done. Thank you again for updating; I love this story!
person Munez
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I can't wait for the next update!
person Kolgrim
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow he really is one disturbed guy! but we already knew that, lol. Man, poor Espen, I also feel sorry for that unknown redhead that was raped and killed in the concert. Still loving your writing! can't wait for more, hurry up and update *whines* hih, I'll wait, but still... I need MORE *_*
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This guy is the biggest psychopath I have ever read about! What an imagination you have! Kinda scary....anyway, back to my review, you gotta update soon!!! I've been at the edge of my seat since the beginning of the story; about an hour and a half, give or take.....please, please, please update soon......
person JulesGer
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Huhu,
OMG Colin is one sick fuck...
I know it`s totally wrong to be amused about Colin but at first i was,because of the way he comments things and people around him.
He is really crazy and i fear for the poor Espen!That Jake dude is really creepy to, i wonder if he is about to give Colin
a dose of his own medicine.
I can`t read rape szenes,run Espen,run...
Hope you continue soon!!!
Greetings, Jules
person Kolgrim
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter, I think you have nothing to worry, you'd deserve more reviews! And it's important to get more info of the characters like you have done, so we can understand them better. With Colin's past... well, he's been through a lot, so it helps to understand why he is the way he is now, but of course not everyone turn out bad because what's being done to them as children, so it doesn't justify anything.
And this Jake... I wonder what he'll do to Colin... and Espen... maybe we should be more worried about him?

Anyway, can't wait for more! n_n
person Kolgrim
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your writing as usual :)what's Espens twins name? I feel sorry for him, no one likes to be in a shadow of a sibling, that doesn't justify what he did... but anyway... I think he's payed a price with being used by so many.

Ok, can't wait to read more ^_^