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Yay for Bruce!

Ok, as a Jersey girl, I had to comment. Sorry.

So, so, so glad you're back!!!! As I've told you in the past, I LOVE this story! It just keeps getting better and better.

Michael is such an ass. He is so oblivious to anyone who's not HIM. Sean can see everything about Gerald, Michael sees only what he wants to see. Idk, I may be rooting for Gerald and Ray (my personal fave, now that Sean is taken! lol)

Oh my god!!! I LOVE this!! LOOOOOOVE it! It's so amazing! Gerald is the sweetest thing! And Michael, he can go shove it!!!! >_< he's such a jerk!!! But I feel excactly like poor Gerry!! Hate that I love him!!! Hahahaha! Thanks for the update! I wait impatiently everyday! Hahaha! Update soon please!! <3

Thank you for keeping up with the story. I really enjoyed reading it again. So much time has gone by since that evening at the party. I wonder what motivated Michael to try to reconcile with Gerald. It seems strange that he would attempt to reconcile and then walk out of the house when Gerald has just stopped by to visit with him. I am eager to see what you are planning to do with these two, I am also eager to learn if Gerald has found out any more info about his dad. He needs to find out before his mother actually does die. I think it is important for Gerald's mother to tell him now that he is older. it is hard to imagine that Michael had been friends with Frank and May for two years while ignoring Gerald and Sean (at school). That is sad. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Love it. I've actually only just found this fiction and read it in one sitting. I find Michael to be so obtuse and insensitive sometimes, but other times he genuinely cares about Gerald. Arrgh! Glad to see Gerald finally making some more friends who care about him. Looking forward to more updates!

First I want to say: Yay!!!! Thanks for updating so quickly!!!!

Second: omg, I was crying throughout the chapter. No kid should have to worry about a parent the way Gerald worries about his mother. And I'm using the word "mother" very loosely. She has NEVER been a mother to him. Mrs. Harrison is more of a mother than her. I can't even think about her; I get so friggen ANGRY!!!! Ok, I'm gonna stop w/her. But I felt Gerald's pain and couldn't imagine how he felt; how scared he must have been. I mean, even tho she's the worst mother, she is the only family he has. Besides Mrs. Harrison, who isn't really blood family.

Ok, now WTF is the matter with Gerald AND Michael?????? Gerald makes his way over to Michael's house. He's in pain, worried about the mom that Michael knows nothing about. They can't even TALK to one another????? Michael is reaching out to Gerald and Gerald just goes upstairs w/Sean, doesn't even wait for Michael to get off his phone????? And Michael just leaves after that? He doesn't follow Gerald upstairs???? If they were girls, they'd be acting completely different! hahah

Great chapter; can't wait for the next! And yes, if you want me to proof the story from ch. 1, just email me all the chapters at LisaT25@msn.com. I'll be more than happy to go thru them for you.

And again, thx. for updating so quickly!

I had read this before quite awhile ago, but re-read it again today. I'm so glad you updated; this is one of my favorite stories on here. I had to cry at the end; Michael really is showing feeling and remorse. I think he's maturing. I loved when Gerald was sleeping in his room, Michael thought that that is when he could be himself. He didn't have to be "cool", he didn't have to worry about people thinking he's not "cool", he didn't have to worry about doing something not "cool"; he could just be his true self. Which only goes to prove that his whole school persona is a fake. What a shame that he has to hide behind a bunch of idiots (Frank), not Jay to hide his insecurities. I do pity him. How he could be best buds w/his brother at home, but at school, pretend that Sean isn't his brother. Sean has more balls than Michael ever will. Kudos for Sean to show no insecurity and be who he is.

I'm curious to find out how old Ray is? You mentioned he was in college? So, now that Gerald is 17, Ray must have graduated? And being in your early 20's w/a 17 yr. old, isn't too bad. Anyway, too bad Gerald's still so in love w/Michaal. I can't wait to find out his reaction to the picture. I was crying and I'm not even him!!!! lol

I love this story; I just wanted to point out a few errors, no biggie really. Cloths is clothes, loose is lose and Collage is college (no need to capitalize the c). Also, some sentences here and there use different tenses. For example: he slide down the hill, instead of slid. Or he wanted to jumped out of his skin, instead of jump. Anyway, just wanted to point it out if you ever were going to go back and edit the chapters.

Anyway, enough criticism, it's a fabulous story and I hope the next chapter is out quicker than this last one! hahha

This is a very good story. I am so glad I got to read it. Michael is my favorite type of clueless jock. He is living in his own world. I am just sorry that Gerald has not gotten back at Frank as yet. I am glad to see that Gerald is giving him shit right back. It is funny how Michael can be so clueless while little Sean has managed to figure out everything that is going on. I also can't believe that Gerald's mother has not told him about his father. That is very heartless of her. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

this is very good and entertaining i hope that you update as soon as possible

great story - please update SOON

Man, I like Jay. His cool and Sandra, she hot I love them emo girls :)
Anyway! I read the rest of the story and you seriously need to update
as soon as possible! This story is great. I'm too lazy to explain why
and I LOVE IMAGINING the two jocks making out. Kind of feel sorry for
Gerald, but I haaaaave a feeling Micheal is going to regret what he did.
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! PWEEEESE!