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i love your characters, especially Gerald, really feel for him!!! ugh but i just hope that they could communicate and make life so much easier for them but i guess this frustration just adds to the intensity of the story XD....i can't help but feel scared for Gerald...i feel like he's going to be hit with more sadness somehow....but really good story!!!

Shit, I don't know what happened, but the rest of chapter 15 wasn't in the attachment. So I apologize for not proofing it. But it was a good chapter. I was sad to hear about Sean and Trent, was it? I forgot his b/f's name.

Anyway, I will get to ch. 16 tomorrow, I promise! :)

oh, my, gosh!!! I love this story!! It is so awesome, I just love Gerald. But I hate that he doesn't feel like he's worthy to Michael.... poor Gerald...
I really hope he patches things up with Michael and they get things straight between them. There's just too much confusion going on...
And Poor Seth, now that he's single after breaking up with his bf. Are you hinting that he may get involved with Gerald somehow?? I love Seth, but I really wouldn't want a fight to break out between him and his brother.
And ray...
I like the guy, but gosh he's protective over Gerald...sheesh...
Anyways, love this story. and I loved that you've updated quickly since the last chapter.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Man, I just wanna hit Gerald upside his head! He's gotta sop worrying so much with this inner turmoil and just "go with it". lol

Good chapter; I'm glad Michael and Gerald are getting closer as more than friends. :)

loving this story!

I really enjoyed this. :) God. Sean almost made me cry with his speech a few parts ago. I loved it, well written, flowing, plot filled. One of the things I worry about is all smut and no story. This is story and I love it.
:)
You're good xD
I look forward to more.

Thank God Michael finally came to his senses!

I'm glad Gerald's mom will be ok. I'm happy for him that he has a chance to better himself and continue to do what he loves, which is his art.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Thanks for the update I am so happy that Michael and Gerald have finally found each other. I hope Gerald will find out who his father is and that his mother will be okay.

just started reading the story and I absoultely love it

OMG, I can't believe Michael kissed him! Finally, right? Thank God his poor-excuse-for-a-mother is gonna be ok. I can't stand the bitch, but maybe now she realizes that she won't be winning any Mother of the Year awards!


Oh, btw: what happened with the format? When I proofed it, the format was fine. It's all jumbled together now. Know what I mean?