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person Lisa
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so, so proud of Gerald! He stood up for himself and he didn't cave in w/Michael! Good for him; he's finally developing a backbone! :)

And I was always rooting for Gerald with Sean anyway! lol

Ok, on to the epilogue!!! :)
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Michael you are a dick just saying maybe he changes only up to chapter 4
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nope Michael is still an ass
person lucmaria
schedule December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hai please email me if u have updated luctsubasa@yahoo.co.id
i am a little sad about the ending, i really hope everything will be better at the epilog....before i am hoping happy ending, but i gues michael really an asshole so make him miserable in the epilog is really welcome....hope gerald will found someone that can make him happy....
schedule December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much for giving Gerald a backbone and finally making him see reason. I am very happy to see Gerald give Michael the boot, so no, I am definitely not disappointed; I'm ecstatic! I look forward to the epilogue, and it would be hilarious to see Gerald's prediction of Frank's future come true. I hope Michael will be in the same boat. MWAHAHAHA.
person Quill
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH man it has been a While!! I have been MIA but I'm SO ECSTATIC that you have continued on with this!! Now that Micheal character, I know he's got some issues but is it too much to ask that he'll just Disappear? I love Gee too much to read about him all broken up and confused again :(.OH how I love Sandra, a girl after my own heart!! And Sean, I think he is supposed to be Gee's Great Love in the near future. I'm just saying *wink*. I wouldn't mind Ray either, boys and bikes are a sexy combination after all. Well, I'm just throwing out my appreciation to you for providing me with such an engrossing story and my utmost support! You are a TALENTED writer! I am so invested in your characters it's ridiculous! Patiently anticipating the next...
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So...I just read through this whole story in one go, and all I can say is that I really really really want Gerald to go to the fancy NY art school and end up with Sean.

This story is amazing and I can't wait to see how it ends!
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't believe it to me so long to find your story but i'm happy to be along for the final few chapters.

Was always hoping Michael would redeem himself but it doesn't look that way. Unless your setting it up for the sequel?

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes Gerald! Get out of Ventura County (although personally it's someplace I'd love to be! lol) and see the world! Take the money and go to a really good art school. He shouldn't worry about the people that watched him. What's done is done and it turned out to be in his favor. I'm so proud of him. :)

Looking forward to the last chapters! =)
schedule November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was good to be able to read this again! I miss the boys, well, Gee, certainly not Michael! You know how I feel about him. lol

I'm glad Gerald is getting a backbone. But he should realize that his mother is all for him reaching for his dreams, whether his dreams are in Cali or NYC. He's gotta let Michael the Ass go. Isn't it obvious since Michael doesn't return his calls or texts and he hasn't seem him in ages, that Michael really doesn't give a shit about him? He needs to let go of Michael the Ass so he can move on and find someone who treats him right.

Anyway, good chapters! Looking forward to the last chapters! :)