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From the best fic i tough iv ever would read to the worst

I started reading your "Reflections" stories, and when I had read several of those, decided to give this one a try. I really liked the "Reflections" stories, but I have to say that so far, this story is my favorite. (I say "so far", because I haven't read everything you have posted yet...but I'll get there. ^_^)

OMG. Excellent. That's all I can say.

I like your story, but one detail really, really seriously bugs me. You've called his dad Albert, Alfred and Arthur. You even managed to have a chapter where he was called Alfrd for half of it, Albert for the other half. It's kind of confusing, really. There's also a few words that slipped in that kind of sound like the word you wanted to use but actually mean something else (in one chapter Michael shields his eyes from the "son", in another Sean elludes to his brother). It's a good story, but it could use a good proofread.

Shit, didn't you post this awhile ago? lol

It made me cry just as much as the first time I read it.

What a fantastic story dieby. I'm sorry to say goodbye to Gee and Sean, etal, but I'm so happy that they're together. Michael's still an ass, but what can you do? At least Gee is over him. :)

Can't wait to read more from you! Have a great Memorial Day! :)

Albert, Arthur or Alfred? Which is it?
Otherwise great story. I really enjoyed it.

Shit, I'm glad you reposted the last chapter! I just realized I didn't r&r when I read it last week! lol Oh, I think it's b/c I wasn't home and I read it on my phone and then forgot to r&r when I got home.

Anyway....I am SO, SO glad Gee wound up with Sean! I've always loved Sean! =) Still don't like Michael, but I'm really glad Gerald got over him.

It was so sad about Gerald's mom. I'm glad she finally found happiness in her life before she died.

Awesome, awesome story, as all your stories are! :)

I hope you and your family have a wonderful Christmakkahkwanza(whatever you celebrate) and a happy and healthy 2012!

I really love it. Even if I knew (actually, I've hoped for) almost from the beginning of the interaction between Gerald and Sean that they are the best fit, even so, I read every of your chapter with joy and sorrow. Because this is life full of joy and filled with sorrow. I am truly your admirer; you know how to draw attention to situations, characters. I like your insight and the expression of it. Well, you are a good writer. Of course, there are a lot of things that could be improved, but this is not the point. You played with emotions as a virtuoso. Keep going. Ah! And Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year with all the best for you and dear ones.

Can't wait for the epilogue! Still so disappointed in Michael. At least he has Sean to lean on.

i sort of wished for some sort of confrontation between mic and g. it doesn't feel like he resolved anything despite punching frank.

but congrats for finishing the story!