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"No mercy!" i love that line and the way they said it. i can't wait to see what happens.

Such a hard lesson to learn, it has taken X so many years to learn some can not be given mercy because they don't deserve it. Will this change him? It's not just hard to learn but a hard lesson in a sense too. I hope X can reconnect with those he loves and find a place for everyone. He is still young and still learning unforntunetly his learning always seem to carry a high price. I hope they can all find their center again. Loved the update thanks so much.

Good no mercy. Bring your son home and than fix the rest of your home:)

omg! that was awesome! thanks for another chapter!

Let them know X. Love this chapter. Keep it up!

How could Armor just choose not to come out again. Ever? What a sad existence that would be. At least before he got to participate a bit, but now if he just goes in all he can do is watch... Sounds like a shitty idea to me, and he says he's not a masochist - yea right. I think Ike and Raisa should still get hitched. I don't like this Kain kid much. Maybe it'll be too much for him and hell go all suicidey or just run away and get killed. And maybe this Six kid has been so brain washed by OW and Sara that he won't want to be a part of VD so he'll die too. Maybe in the end they all die bloody gruesome deaths. Or maybe there's a happily ever after, but you know what they say about happily ever afters - means the story ain't over yet. Anyways, I haven't praised you for some time. I still think your writing is amazing - it's been at least 2 or 3 years that i've been reading your work and i'm still enthralled. Infinite kudos kiix. :)
-Ana

i hope he get's Armor back. i like how the chapter ends. can't wait for the next chapter.

Hi there, another new fan of your (^.^)...i have been following your fic since few months back, sadly missed the first book but my friend has been filling her cut off version of it.
It's good, better than good, for me, you have raise the bar. Now, the majority of fics i read feels bland because of you *glare* hahaha
This new chapter is good, i'm glad that x manage to sort off his feelings and head did not become an emotional wreck. I guess the Armor/X separation is needed for their relationship to mature.
anyway, congrats for the publishing of the first book, definately buying it once it hit the store.
Counting the days to the next chp for Ripley XD

oh man...
Great chapter, loved the daughter-father interaction :)

~Spiritxx

GAHH UPDATE PLEASE! And I hope everything will work out tomorrow... can you get a ride to your new job from a friend or something? ><; good luck!