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omg this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. i cant wait for the next installments, but i never want it to end. kill william. leave liam.

Alright X, go get your baby boy back:)

WOHOOOO! nice update and fast as well. No further comment about the plot, but i'm curious to know the continuation. Surely it won't be easy to kill Serephina although all family involved.

I cannot get to the discussion link. i dunno why (and here i also tried to register in aff). Anyway...i dun sure i want william or liam died...but it's up to you(as long as u make us having massive lump in our heart --- angsty fans here). But since this is final, why not make it extreme (one of brothers died) or maybe claudius? *damn..i'll get whacked by every fans*. but see...this is kinda world scale war...life is not easy and i'm sure there must be sacrifices for every happiness. I actually want to know Ripley died, but i dun think he's long enough with the pod that we'll sympathizes with his death.

I think that Armor case is not in the right time...why not makes some consequences? big one...
Everyone here must be kinda suspect that dragon egg will have to do with someone death (since it activated by blood of family), so u'll better creates very big surprise bout that.

Good update! anyway...since u're said 3 chappie left...this is like ticking bomb and counting time to the end of this story (damn,...i love this one)

Ri

Aah damn Kiix you're too good at drawing out the start of the battle!!

~Spiritxx

hi! another amazing chapter!! I can't wait to see Orel Wessel take his just dessert . And Princess Sara. I just love how you use li'll bits of plot and branch out to another and another books later (a bit like russian dolls).Did you think of Serephina then already??? I mean letting Sara live was just a bit of trivia to show X still knew mercy and then WHAM his knew motto is "no mercy" because of her.
What will happen to Armor and X? I can see Kaine meeting MArcus in the corridor, X trying to explain "MMM Kaine that's not Armor it's MArcus...he's huuuuuu his twin!!yeh that it his twin you won't see him again" with X thinking all the while 'I'll not cry I won't cry damnit!!!!' Their situation is so complicated! X must forgive Armor for hiding Kaine's existence, Kaine must do pretty much the same plus for all the years he thought his dad didn't want him AND there's all the thing with X always zapping Armor without even meaning to... God I can't wait!! Every time I think nothing else can possibly happen you take another bunny out of your hat.

About your poll somehow I can't access it , it keep saying the link doesn't exist or some such so I give you my view here if you don't mind... Why do you want to kill the Billy idol duo????? please nooooooo. mmm.Ok I'll stop the histerics. I can see william die, after all you already explained it was a matter of time so yeah I'd be super sad but I'd understand, maybe jumping to save Hades. But Liam's the true Immortal he must somehow live, what would his little shepherd do otherwise?? I'm sure X could do his funky-freaky soul thing. Beaside I'm still waiting for the other shoe to drop with the mess with hades's daugther, he can't face it alone!!

LadyS

3 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im excited and sad at the same time.

Wow this party is on! Great chapter lots of action, nice interpersonal touches. Hmm is this new lycan going to be seen more? Marcus is so, so angry at Ripley it's not even funny and it kinda cute really, like a prickly hedgehog. Man, we are getting close to the end? That sucks but it's getting so exciting. Can't wait till the next chapter.

Been reading 2 chapter in a row! AMAZING! ur work never ceased to amaze me! Please make the relation between xavier and armor clearer! it's quite angsty and i love it so much! Xavier is kinda destroying himself in my opinion...and Armor is the only one who can stop it. He's kind of can see nothing in front of him... he's dying (at least that what i'm captured).

Is there a possibilities that one of the personality dies? If there is..i really curious how you make xavier developed in the next chapter! i kinda took a note about marcus saying about xavier forgiving himself...
Please update soon!

Ri

Bring it onnnnn!!! :)

~Spiritxx

And this is why I love X and even though he is number 2 brother, he is the pillar stone, the center strength, he is the core of that body and he carries all of the weight of what's going on. He is the one who puts others needs in front of his own. He is the selfless one and that is why he is my favorite. Oh I hope he Seraphanie and OW down!