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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh! I like where it is going, seems interesting, I will definitely keep reading!
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Miniwinglets? I thought not until the winglets were thirty. Is Lex gay?
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness!! I thought we were done, and now the S E X-men are back again? :-) Keep those bunnies going!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kind of like this prologue... It's an introduction, it pulled me back into the situation (kind of). Does Haley's moving mean we're going to have less of him? :( Ah but it is for the good of the litter.. I guess I can't have my cake and eat it (pun half-intended hehe). I'm looking forward to this party they're supposed to have, is it for the Brothers' birthday? (wait, since they were all 'born' at different times, do they have different birthdays? Wicked, I want four birthdays a year! hehe)
~Spiritxx
~Spiritxx
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw man... 13 years have gone by already? It seems like they were all just little winglets and pups and now they're grown up!! It makes me sad in a motherly sort of way that I can't really comprehend, yanno, not being a mother and all. :)
It was nice to see an update of sorts instead of just jumping right into the story with a "... 13 Years Later" disclaimer at the top. It would have been nice to see what Billiam and Hades were up to though in the past years. But I'm sure we'll find out soon enough, yes?
I understand X's mom being pissed about him healing her -- it's not the "natural" thing to do after all. And I'm also fairly certain that she's alive, just the sentence about "wasn't able to extend her life" made it a bit confusing.
Also - maybe you've mentioned this somewhere else that I've forgotten but can Lycans and Vampires interbreed? I mean with Claudia & Vlad being together... you'd think that if it were possible for such things to occur, that there might be a winged pup flying around one of these days. Unless, of course, it's the equivalent to a dog and cat breeding... and if that's the case, then I guess you've got your perfect birth control there, now don't ya?
Can't wait to see what happens in Book 5! I'm sure it'll be suspenseful and amusing and intense and lovely and incredibly well-written as always. :)
It was nice to see an update of sorts instead of just jumping right into the story with a "... 13 Years Later" disclaimer at the top. It would have been nice to see what Billiam and Hades were up to though in the past years. But I'm sure we'll find out soon enough, yes?
I understand X's mom being pissed about him healing her -- it's not the "natural" thing to do after all. And I'm also fairly certain that she's alive, just the sentence about "wasn't able to extend her life" made it a bit confusing.
Also - maybe you've mentioned this somewhere else that I've forgotten but can Lycans and Vampires interbreed? I mean with Claudia & Vlad being together... you'd think that if it were possible for such things to occur, that there might be a winged pup flying around one of these days. Unless, of course, it's the equivalent to a dog and cat breeding... and if that's the case, then I guess you've got your perfect birth control there, now don't ya?
Can't wait to see what happens in Book 5! I'm sure it'll be suspenseful and amusing and intense and lovely and incredibly well-written as always. :)
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*mwha!* Hiya! Miss me? Finally got my laptop back, just in time to see you had finished Cloves! Loved it! Haven't got to read this new chapter yet, so will do that now. Congrats on getting published! I knew you could do it! I only just realized that every story begins with 'C'. Did you do that purposely?
Sadly, I'm down with a head cold, thus I'm being weird due to lack of sleep and medicnices. Please forgive this misspelt review and keep up with your awesomeness!
Sadly, I'm down with a head cold, thus I'm being weird due to lack of sleep and medicnices. Please forgive this misspelt review and keep up with your awesomeness!
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like it so far. Update please!
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I saw this and almost fainted in happiness! i cant wait to see what new plot line twist and turns you have!
im still a little confused on what happened between them and their mother, but i am thinking you are going to expand on that in the future, lol.
its sad to see everyone all grown up, i hope that Haley, ping, and their gang are still in this book! lol
so far so good, i cant wait for the rest of the chapters.
good luck with the editing of Cake!
im still a little confused on what happened between them and their mother, but i am thinking you are going to expand on that in the future, lol.
its sad to see everyone all grown up, i hope that Haley, ping, and their gang are still in this book! lol
so far so good, i cant wait for the rest of the chapters.
good luck with the editing of Cake!
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot! Candy! The 5th book! yay! ^0^
I'm a bit confused though... about his mom and why she's mad. B/c he used the healing powers? And now i miss everyone too! T__T and why is Alexander being sulky? I hope nothing bad happens. In a way, i'm really sad that the kids are already grown up since we kinda just got to know them but i understand. I'm also really confused with the last line 'Got my Glocks. Got my daggers. Time to kill someone.' I mean he's not planning to kill his mom is he?! O___O since it's inserted right after talking about how he hoped his mom will come! ;__; Other than that and being a bit shorter than the usual chapter, it's a pretty good start for Candy. I do think that it could be explained a bit better but i think right now i'm still overwhelmed with the 5th book is being written to say anything else. ^0^ =hugs= thanks and i will keep stalkin- i mean... checking for your updates! X3
Your fan,
m i l k x ness
I'm a bit confused though... about his mom and why she's mad. B/c he used the healing powers? And now i miss everyone too! T__T and why is Alexander being sulky? I hope nothing bad happens. In a way, i'm really sad that the kids are already grown up since we kinda just got to know them but i understand. I'm also really confused with the last line 'Got my Glocks. Got my daggers. Time to kill someone.' I mean he's not planning to kill his mom is he?! O___O since it's inserted right after talking about how he hoped his mom will come! ;__; Other than that and being a bit shorter than the usual chapter, it's a pretty good start for Candy. I do think that it could be explained a bit better but i think right now i'm still overwhelmed with the 5th book is being written to say anything else. ^0^ =hugs= thanks and i will keep stalkin- i mean... checking for your updates! X3
Your fan,
m i l k x ness
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far :P I'd say an awesome beginning to the new saga. And i'll add that i really enjoy the final sentences in this chapter. It really sets up for the next chapter :D Can't wait for more, i was like a caffeine junkie without caffiene when Clove ended :P now i can get my fix again lol. Awesome :P