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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved Chapter 2.
Sexy as hell!!!!
Sexy as hell!!!!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this definitely greatly improved my day!!!!
i love chapter two and i can't wait to see where you go with the plot. lol.
one suggestion though, there were some parts in Chapter 2, where i was slightly confused, maybe you can try to make it more fluid in some parts? i don't know, it could have just been me, i've been feelin crappy lately.
other than that, it was great!!!!!
i love chapter two and i can't wait to see where you go with the plot. lol.
one suggestion though, there were some parts in Chapter 2, where i was slightly confused, maybe you can try to make it more fluid in some parts? i don't know, it could have just been me, i've been feelin crappy lately.
other than that, it was great!!!!!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, Vlad has really turned out to be a sweet guy.. err.. Lycan, lol. I can't shake the feeling of paranoia that what Richard said is going to come back and bite them in the ass- the whole angels have told me this and yadda yadda yadda. Gah, I'm just going to hope that I'm too paranoid!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good luck with the new job! May you be well in 2008.
I love the stile and I have a feeling this one is more like the elder books, but I admit it still doesn't work for me. The whole Lycan-affair isn't near anywhere conclusive. (You know my opinion about this, Claudia as empress etc.) You jumped another 13 years but leave us more or minder hanging about the whole 19 missing ones - with the exception of not even a month when the brothers returned from OW. To me it feels like everywhere are leftovers of the storyline that just wait to be picked up again and new 'hints' keep turning up. Currently I wonder about point Z, it would seem that the brothers becoming Blood Emperor was the logical conclusion but do you still intent to get them there?
And then the kids. They are just 19 but while the parental and great parental generation was granted eons of time to grow up they shoulder responsibilities that they just shouldn't. And what is with that 'Hades had nothing on her resolve' thing? She is 19, a possible hair to the throne and 19, 19, 19! X has to become at least 100 to be allowed on his own throne but his daughter is allowed into the house before considered a legal adult?
The ancients work out. There is true development in both history and character and none is too rushed. I love Hades and hope there will be more of him soon.
I guess I just have to sit and wait where you take us this time and see what works for me and what doesn't. Still love it and absolutely don't mean to insult you! Go on!
I love the stile and I have a feeling this one is more like the elder books, but I admit it still doesn't work for me. The whole Lycan-affair isn't near anywhere conclusive. (You know my opinion about this, Claudia as empress etc.) You jumped another 13 years but leave us more or minder hanging about the whole 19 missing ones - with the exception of not even a month when the brothers returned from OW. To me it feels like everywhere are leftovers of the storyline that just wait to be picked up again and new 'hints' keep turning up. Currently I wonder about point Z, it would seem that the brothers becoming Blood Emperor was the logical conclusion but do you still intent to get them there?
And then the kids. They are just 19 but while the parental and great parental generation was granted eons of time to grow up they shoulder responsibilities that they just shouldn't. And what is with that 'Hades had nothing on her resolve' thing? She is 19, a possible hair to the throne and 19, 19, 19! X has to become at least 100 to be allowed on his own throne but his daughter is allowed into the house before considered a legal adult?
The ancients work out. There is true development in both history and character and none is too rushed. I love Hades and hope there will be more of him soon.
I guess I just have to sit and wait where you take us this time and see what works for me and what doesn't. Still love it and absolutely don't mean to insult you! Go on!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAH, I'd missed this;] "the Von Drachenfeld shaggin’ wagon" - ROTFLMAO>.<
I like this Marcus and the feel of closeness between all of them (Marcus/Azrael/Vlad)
Oh and that stalker was a nut case.
I like this Marcus and the feel of closeness between all of them (Marcus/Azrael/Vlad)
Oh and that stalker was a nut case.
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thankies for another chapter!!!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please I so need to see some Az/Marcus action(^_~)
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this series and I can't wait to read more about what happens in the series. I would have to say that you sre an excellent writer and know how to keep the reader wainting to find out what happens next.
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FABULOUS!
I am forced to visit my family, my computer dies and needs a hard drive replaced, I'm having the worst break ever, then I finally get my computer back and I see you have a story sitting here for me to read. Things are looking up now! You have no idea how happy it made me to see this. Alright, commenty time.
It makes me sort of sad that the trio and his mom (boy does that butcher grammar or what?) aren't getting along. Personally I don't understand why she'd be mad... maybe have her explain it for the thinkingly challenged ones (meaning me) lol. Umm... it's good to hear about the kids. Damn those moody teenaged boys! Please update soon, I'm anxious to hear more stories about the brood!
I am forced to visit my family, my computer dies and needs a hard drive replaced, I'm having the worst break ever, then I finally get my computer back and I see you have a story sitting here for me to read. Things are looking up now! You have no idea how happy it made me to see this. Alright, commenty time.
It makes me sort of sad that the trio and his mom (boy does that butcher grammar or what?) aren't getting along. Personally I don't understand why she'd be mad... maybe have her explain it for the thinkingly challenged ones (meaning me) lol. Umm... it's good to hear about the kids. Damn those moody teenaged boys! Please update soon, I'm anxious to hear more stories about the brood!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH OH OH One more thing!
I miss having puppies around! It's cool that the kids are all grown up... BOUND to happen some time. But... the pups were so adorable! And I really hope that you bring Haley and Ping into the story again somehow... I really like them.
I miss having puppies around! It's cool that the kids are all grown up... BOUND to happen some time. But... the pups were so adorable! And I really hope that you bring Haley and Ping into the story again somehow... I really like them.