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person Cindyip
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Armor...sixteen...X, two words jail bait:)
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know it's been a long time since I've reviewed but a lot of things have happened over the past few months. I never really did congratulate you for getting publishing on Cake, and just so you know, I will be purchasing it as soon as it comes out. After having my laptop crash and unsalvageable I realized that I rarely had any focus in my stories at all. Now that I'm pumped up on Caffeine and Sugar I can finally get to writing the way I want.

If this truly is the end for the Cake series...I want you to know that I will miss it greatly. I'd just be a little upset that I didn't get to read a whole lot about his kids.

Have fun.

~Candy Lynn
person lone_child
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg thank you soo much for the awesome chapter. thank you for the whole book, actually. it was so touching and evoked so many emotions o.o
you're such a wonderful writer!
can't wait for the epilogue and the next book!
person Ana
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on another book completed.
person Laur
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...
person NessaC
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an amazing ending! I love Liam reincarnated, it's like you killed him and didn't kill him :)
So sad that Marcus & Armor have left... so will the next book be the time without them? Or maybe they'll make a dramatic appearance halfway through the sabbatical.. hmmm.
I'm excited that there's going to be another book too!! yay!!

You are a fantastic writer - thanks for sharing your stories with us!!!

~Spiritxx
person ri
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! Fascinating Ending! but in my opinion, it's a bit lack in plot climax. It's like "It's ended?". It's good to have book 6! YAY! i dun want this series to end. Anyway...but please dun extend it if u dun need to like those market aim product that have more sequels and sequels and sequels... Of course it should be extended if u have to.

I'm curious about the epilogue. This remind me when u first only want this series to be trilogy or something ( a bit forgot...) and now to 6!!! with those loyal fans!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! I've promote ur work to a lot of my friend!

Anyway..been curious for a while. Isn't ur avatar come from Tales game series (i forgot which one) ... are u a gamer as well?

Best Regards,

Ri
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Too the empress, thank you.

This is once again a glorious read. I eagerly await your next offering.
person Cindyip
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* Oh, Armor please don't leave...we need youT_T
person LMS/VES
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this ending. I wasn't expecting you to do that with Liam, but I really liked it. Is there going to be another book? I hope so, there's still so much and Liam being in Seth leaves especially wanting more, not to mention the lycan, fae, etc.
By the way, I'm not sure if you got my email, but for some reason I was taken off the mailing list for new chapters? The last chapter I was updated about was the one that was around Halloween, I think 42. Could I be put back onto the list, or are you no longer doing it? Thanks.
Really hoping for that epilogue and hopefully another book?