AFF Fiction Portal
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
crazy!!! i didn't expect him to be a werewolf. but wouldn't he be able to change when he was younger? or unless Liam did something.....hmmm....love this chapter!!!
person laur
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOH this chapter was great!

The clicking of the glasses things were funny.

I am still alittle confused on the HAdes and his daughter thing but it will be explained in due time. i guessss...

So...X/Az/Sex/Skell are going to be guardians to 12 pups. That should be interesting!!!
person Duelriel
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, the plot thickens! I await to see how the pod takes care of the new little wolves! Also, the rockin' performance. The update took too long, it left me with a deep craving for MORE MORE MORE!
person Cindyip
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
X the werewolf?! Interesting, even after all of this you still got secretsO_o
person Ana
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what I was kinda hoping that Billy would go, but what a price.
person lavcea
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how hot is it that haley and ping are back!!! let's party. -L
person steph291
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 6 - what a great chapter! I like it when the gang is all together, or maybe it's because everyone seems so happy. I hope the party doesn't end poorly... please? don't make the party end poorly? hey, why does X get the b-day party, since he's not brother #1? is it because he's the diplomatic one?

the Morgan off-shoot sounds interesting... is that going to be part of this story or the next one? you know, if you're worried about word count, you should stick to one plot per story, no? I mean, you better be finally addressing the lycan threat, right? what was it introduced in book 2 and we're on book 5?

of course, I'll love your story regardless =)
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww I just love how chapter six ended, Haley and his gang is back to help celebrate Xavier's birthday. Oh and more cute little cubbies. I teared up when they all showed up, I've missed them too. Poor Xavier now he has to worry about this Morgan and his mother seeking revenge on the whole nation? Oh boy “hell hath no fury like a women scorned” don’t know who quoted that, but I hear it often. Looks like a war brewing about. Just want to say how much I love the relationships between lovers, boy oh boy can you make them anymore lovable? The romance is so yummy I can’t wait for when you give them alone time to cuddle and just be themselves. I am so hooked on it and can never get enough. Don’t know which couple I like best X with Armor, A with Marcus or Sex with Claudius. Jury still out on Skell and the blueberry muffin. (Hint, hint might be time for a little Skell and his blueness???) Anyway keep up the wonderful story, did I tell you how much I love your writing???? (Now I will go and pout in the corner and await your next update).
person steph291
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 6 - so, I was reading another story (*gasp*), and one of the characters said, "it's not your fault." and I started thinking... hey, Lanseng said that to X! What'd he mean????
person k
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Kiix,

thanks for your concern. It's safe to say I know now how a lab rat feels. At least I get greetings which I'm sure the rats miss out.

You really love tormenting Honeybee, don't you? OMG - was all I could think and than Morgan ... Morgan le fay? I'm so curious how Hades is taking to her and she to him. Liam has finally wormed a way into my heart, but I still want to slap him. He mentioned before he does things and than lives with them, but he doesn't seem to think about much in the first place. And poor William (Billy)... I want to hug him and Honeybee.

I'm so curious about Morgan but I truly hope you won't turn her into another Alarik.(Family issues run in the family...oh the drama!) BTW do your vampires regenerate chopped extremeties? I can't imagine Morgan with one arm missing. I truly love this chapter and the pack is finally complete again (if not for long)!

Hugs to you!