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person Akemi
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you liked it! *dances*

Well, it was during the rocky times in Sex and Claudius's relationship, and something about all that hit me hard. As far as the song itself, the mood of it, I think, sort of starts out all... pleasant, but not quite perfect. Then it very obviously takes a turn for the worst. For the next bits I get a feeling of two distinct "voices" sounding separately and together, sometimes kind of leaning on each other for support. Then it ends up just about right where it started.

It isn't a perfect representation of their relationship, but it reminded me of it.

Now I'll go read the new chapters...wanted to reply to you first.
person ayachan
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drooooooool* Thank you!!!
person Duelriel
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you stuck on character and didn't give Claudius a threesome... but damn, it would have been hot. What about that collection of one shots you were making between books? I fever you get bored, you could put a hot foursome there to satisfy your legions of horny readers.
Also... I'm in anticipation for more Hades/Liam angst! They're so interesting, I must say!
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yip, yip, yipity!!! (falls down and goes out like a light all yiped out)when I am fully recovered I will tell how much I loved this chapter. ooohhhhh I'm so wiped out, good job. whew!
I hope Hades and Billiam can get their act together. Give them some yipping time!
Jewel
person NessaC
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww… oh well, two threesomes was wonderful to read :)
I have to admire Claudius though for mostly sticking to his principles. Makes me think of a right gentleman. Not that he ever isn’t, but this just made me think it even more ;)
Hopefully Hades will come to a little sense and keep his mouth shut and just enjoy William while he’s around… And is there really no one stronger that Liam could merge with??

~Spiritxx
person blaze
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, sorry about the 4some, but hey, its still turned out hot! lol, :D.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Guuhhh*has lost coherent speech*
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, but it's absolutely romantic and sweet that Claudius doesn't join in b/c of his promise and love for his lovely white Fallen. It just shows that even though he's devoid of a lot of feelings, he'll truly keep the love he has close to him. it was absolutely sweet though i really do wish of a chapter of SashaxFallen soon~ oh and thank you so much for this nice long juicy chapter =drooool=

I also read your 'How do you write' and unfortunately, i usually listen to japanese music but i do know some songs here and there.

'if only' by Gabe Bondoc
'Stuttering' by Ben's Brother
'I Wanna Know' by Joe
'My Angel' by gYm (this is japanese w/ some english but i had to mention it... just look at the title!)
'Because of You' by Ne-Yo
'Sexy Love' by Ne-Yo
'So Sick' by Ne-Yo
'Mirror' by Ne-Yo
'When You're Mad' by Ne-Yo
'Something Like You' by N'Sync
'Selfish' by N'Sync

and all of these songs can be heard in imeem.com

Needless to say, most of them(if not all) are love/romantic songs. Hope these lovely songs inspire you...


Your fan,
m i l k xness
person lone_child
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thankies for another awesome chapter~
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*whine* Yes, I hate it too.^^ Me want Claudius.